Fic: Hasioa chu: the taming force (Firefly: PG 13)

[zooey_glass04]

Title: Hasioa chu: the taming force (small restraint)
Fandom: Firefly
Rating: PG13 for language
Genre: Gen
Pairing/Characters: Jayne
Word count: 401 words
Disclaimer: Firefly, etc belong to Joss et al: I'm just borrowing
Beta: The lovely, lovely parenthetical did a sterling job betaing, as usual <3
Notes/Summary: Missing scene from the pilot: Jayne. You'll keep

Comments

[parenthetical]

Wooooooooooooooooo, go you, my dear! Fabulous as ever. :D You are a fic-writing mofo these days! *cheers on*

[zooey_glass04]

Heee and you bear full responsibility, you fandom enabler, you. *LOVES*

[xx_squish_xx]

I really liked that! Very true to Jayne, I could see this as being exactly how he would have been thinking when he left that table.

[zooey_glass04]

I'm glad you enjoyed! This is my first try at writing Jayne, so I am pleased you think he is convincing.

Thanks for commenting!

[firelakie]

The pilot needed that. Very well written from Jayne's POV.

[zooey_glass04]

I'm glad you enjoyed - it's my first time writing Jayne, so I'm glad it worked for you.

Thanks for commenting!

[hereswith]

I liked this a lot and your Jayne voice here is very good. Nicely done!

[zooey_glass04]

Thanks very much - I'm glad you enjoyed!

[homespunfic]

Good missing scene, this sounds exactly right. Very true to character, I think, that he would hear his ma. Love the last lines. Hee. Clever.

[zooey_glass04]

Hurrah - I'm glad you think it sounds in character, as that something which is very important to me as a reader, and hence as a writer. Glad you enjoyed :D

Thanks for commenting!