CB: Chapter Three: A Place Called Home

[zoe_jayne]

Title: A Place Called Home
Author: Zoe_Jayne (with help and encouragement from Domina Rin)
Series: Cloudburst (Chapter Three)
Spoilers: If you haven't read the other chapters, it may not make much sense...
Warnings: Mama'sBoy!Jayne, Reader!River
Wordcount: 1684

Comments

[rinalin]

*Tackles and smothers with hugs*

OMG.

*swoons*

I love Jayne. In all his angst and "Creepy" following after him.

*Giggles*

And OH, his sisters all "girlified"!

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

[ambassadorserra]

On behalf of the Barnhart Brothers; who by the way were thrilled to be mentioned, I would like to say this was....FAB!
I love it and you're a genius!
I can almost see Jayne squirming as his sisters clamour around!
~Dee

[aliaspiral]

im totally in love with this line:
"Too cold, too lost. A snowflake adrift. I didn't bring a coat."

and brave Jayne, going home, and River, as always, hitting too close to home (inadverdant pun, really), and then getting ambushed by his sisters!! im so excited.

i want the next part, with Jayne and sisters and Cobbs and River. yes.

[morgannas_gate]

Oh so amazing.

*hugs*

[insipid_paragon]

So lovely and melancholy and oh.

*giggle*

And then...*giggle* His sisters. Girlified. The horror!