Wind at Dawn (Noble Things)- June 1918

Nov 03, 2010 18:59

3rd june, 1918

more refugees on the roads. word is that the americans are coming en masse, and the krauts are making a last surge in advance of their arrival. a few have recommended that we keep moving, as we are not that far south of paris. we’ll see.

been doing some doctoring here and there- mostly children with cuts or colds, the ( Read more... )

pinto, wind at dawn, wwi, au, rating: nc-17, angst

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amerasu1013 November 11 2010, 22:43:19 UTC
LOL at the humor! Elisabeth falling down and rolling ahaha! At least the land is flat, yes. XD
And awww at the baby! So cute! (Although I remember a conversation in the chat, so I'm worried D:)
And noooo no fighting! And nooo at Chris wanting to go back and fight! Aaah! (especially since I already kinda know a thing or 2 about the ending)
And *sigh* at them leaving the house. It was a nice little haven for them, all alone and unwatched. But well, couldn't last...
Next part now!

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zjofierose November 11 2010, 22:47:21 UTC
oh, man, the humor was the hard part! they're both so funny IRL, and i just... like, angst is easy for me to write. the funny? dude. so hard.

*flails at you in general*

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therumjournals November 15 2010, 02:46:49 UTC
ha ha, of course the baby is named jean-luc!

also liked i’m a doctor, not a soldier :-)

taking a break now to go to sleep. i don't want this story to end, so i think now is a good time to take a little hiatus. i'll be back tomorrow for the rest.

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zjofierose November 15 2010, 03:30:38 UTC
haha. you get a cookie for being the first to nab the bones ref. ;)

sleep well, bb. hope you like the rest of it too!

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adoorhasopened March 2 2011, 07:00:16 UTC
*whimpers*

elisabet still enormous. i worry about her falling. and then i worry about her rolling…
well. at least it’s flat around here.
mostly.
I am glad that Zach and Chris still have their humor at times. Especially Zach. It seems Zach's heart has aged him beyond his years, so it's lovely to see he is still young and can find something funny. It makes me happy for them, that they still find these moments for themselves.

He blows out the candle and leans in close, pressing his face to Chris’ in the still dark. He rubs his nose into the hair just at Chris’ temple, inhaling deeply and tracing his lips across the verge of skin just above his ear. Chris wakes enough to raise a hand, pulling Zach’s head down and kissing him sleepily, mouth warm and loose, fingers loosing their grip as he slides back into unconsciousness.Ohhh. So lovely. This moment made me thrill in my own personal, intimate moments. When you love someone THAT much. That overwhelming feeling of just watching them and knowing how much they affect you. That you've never ( ... )

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zjofierose March 3 2011, 08:43:29 UTC
yes. i'm glad i managed to keep some humor in there. i'm not the best at writing it, but it was absolutely necessary...

and yes. this is how i love my husband. completely, utterly, painfully. even after ten years, i still love him this way.

he hasn't read the whole thing yet, but i told him, and meant it, that the whole thing is really a love letter to him. i could never write a relationship like this if i didn't know what it was to love like this.

and it sounds like you do too. now go hug the husban.

<333

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