Oh wow, this completely broke me - I think most of that's because of how realistic this is, and how easy it is to believe that these characters will have these things happen to them and they will become these people. And it's so beautifully written, too - very quiet but lovely descriptions with feeling. This was heartbreaking, but somehow sweet and hopeful, too. And I love all of it. :) Thank you for posting this.
Oh wow, what a punch-in-the-gut of a story. I really loved how you used the economy as a really realistic, sad, slow downward spiral for Jim and Pam. And the very-latter-day Jim/Karen was so nicely bittersweet.
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