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[zinniazayda]

Today I actually did stuff. Ha. It was nice to do absolutely nothing for awhile, but I was getting restless

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[semplice]

*giggle* considering wheat is Not My Friend this poem made me giggle. But I was... impressed.

[zinniazayda]

Hee hee, I never thought of that. And thank you...

"She writes to shock other people and herself."

[anonymous]

Sounds like as good a reason as any.

Congratulations on the poem. If that's how good most of your poetry is you've got a real gift. "Bread" reminds me of the work of Aimee Nezhukumatathil, a poet local to my area whose work I really dig: http://www.aimeenez.com/

--Damien

[zinniazayda]

Thank you for the link and the compliment. My creative writing teacher helped a lot with line breaks, but the wording is (almost) all mine, and I'm proud of that.

[petrazpolyverse]

Am currently pondering this in the light of Rocky Horror toast throwing...

[sakusha]

... ::edges warily away from bread:: That was a delightful poem. I normally am not that big a fan of poetry... but I liked this. That's saying something. Congratulations~

And good luck with your GED!

I hope obtaining your fingerprint card is an easy process. lordofchaos (on my friends list) feels otherwise. ^^;; ::glomp:: Congrats on your semi-job and munnies!

[zinniazayda]

Pie compliments and good wishes! *treasures them* Thank you. ^__^