H50 fic: Fall Madly in Bed (Steve/Danny, NC-17)

[zinfic]

Title: Fall Madly in Bed
Author: Zinnith
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: ~4800
Summary: Danny has a bad day and Steve is the opposite of smooth.

"Did you... sorry, did you just kiss me to cheer me up?"

Notes: Thank you, anyanka_eg for the quick beta!

Comments

[grimcognito]

This was perfect in so many ways, especially for how not perfect their fumbling first time was. The sweetness and hurt/comfort and the banter, I can't decide what I like best, it's all so good!

[zinfic]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! First times are seldom perfect *g*

[chaoticallyclev]

[zinfic]

Aw, Steve!face! Thank you!

[michele659]

They're falling into bed and falling in love!
Beautifully written story that was so very much "them". Even when they're in the middle of passion they're bickering/bantering,lol. Very funny,sweet and sexy!
Thanks for writing!

[zinfic]

They stop to bicker in the middle of hostage negotiations with serial killers so why not in the middle of passion *g* Thank you!

[zinfic]

Thank you, I'm glad you like it! I love writing realistic awkward sex *g*

[somehowunbroken]

LOVE. Much of it, for this, mhmm. The banter is just perfect, and the end just makes me smile so much :)

[zinfic]

Thank you! Smiles make me happy :D