Drunkybears (Adam/Brad)

[zillah_slash]

Title: Drunkybears

Comments

[kittys_devil]

Awww snuggly Adam and cute Brad taking care of him!!

[zillah_slash]

Thank you!

[vegas1024]

will there be more? pls say there will be more!

[zillah_slash]

I don't think so. I know people seem to really hate endings that are downbeat or have doubt, but I think it fits.

Thanks for reading it.

[vegas1024]

i enjoyed reading it!

[zillah_slash]

Awesome! I just kinda go where the story takes me-it's true. And it wound up in this sort of doubtful but not entirely hopeless place.

[casey270]

i love cuddly Adam & confused Brad & even the way you cliffhangered us.

i really like this!

[zillah_slash]

I know, and I'm trying to defend the cliffhanging! But who knows how much Adam remembers, but it might be okay in the long run. He did tell Brad to stay and that he'd see him tonight.

Thank you!

[casey270]

who said always leave them wanting more?

whoever, it fits with writing, too. i loved the ending. it lets me continue on in my head.

[zillah_slash]

Hahahahaha, so true.

[eowyn_for_adam]

As much as I love the funny, silly, sweeet parts that come before, that LAST line just got to me and put a perfect cap on the story...
The last night was a sip of the coffee that "was already cold"
What a way to turn the tone of an entire story into something else with just a few well-chosen words!
Beautifully-written!

[zillah_slash]

*beams*

I love it when the perfect last line ambushes me! That line wasn't planned, but everything in the story led up to it. Thank you.

[pensnest]

I love the way you ended this. It felt like a giggly, Adam-drunk, silly story, and then... Lovely.

[zillah_slash]

Thank you. Bittersweet is a good flavor for Brad/Adam, in my opinion.