Confession from the pilot's chair - LJ Idol Week

[zhent]

The following documents are image scans from the mission debriefing of the alien pilot Trogdar Bleft, acquired at great personal peril. Some things were redacted on the copy I was given, ostensibly for state security of his home planet.

Comments

[roina_arwen]

This is very fun! I like all the "coffee" stains too - adds some realism to it, lol!

[zhent]

Thanks! When Gary gave us this topic, I had too many ideas, but latched on to this one and went for it. The thought of making i look like a government document came toward then end,, but I feel like presentation is a part of everything we do, so added all of that after my beta reader got done with the story. I'm so glad it works!

[impoetry]

Great job! And I especially enjoy the presentation. Well done. :)

[zhent]

Thanks!

[kehlen]

I very much enjoyed the other side of the story :D

[zhent]

Thanks! It was a lot of fun to put this together!

[rayaso]

So much fun! I loved the coffee stains and the blackouts, and the overall idea. It had me smiling the whole time.

[zhent]

Thank you for the feedback! I had a lot of fun putting this together!

[bleodswean]

Great job! So much work. "Esteemed Inquisitors" is fantastic!

[zhent]

Thanks! Trogdar just had to kiss up to them. I'm hoping I get the chance to tell what the inquisitors decide.