Blood Poison 27 and 28

[decantate]

After this I think it will be epilogue snapshots?  Or should I just add them as chapters?  Because there are Further Adventures.  Also, can I add?  Zevran is so hard to write.  He's loyal!  He's a liar!  He's dangerous!  He is kind of moral!  He's funny, in a gruesome way!  He's sexy!  If I am screwing these up it's totally his fault and not mine

Comments

[kisekinotenshi]

That's the whole appeal of Zev, that he's such a complex character. X3

28 made me sad. Poor Neria (never thought I'd be saying that).

[decantate]

She didn't guess how bad it would get when she went in, and Zev placed rather too much faith in her ability to look after herself, mainly because she works so hard to hide how sheltered the Tower made her. Still, I wonder if she isn't a true victim because of how she was choosing not to defend herself just to get to Conti? I don't know! This is so fun to write. :)

[kisekinotenshi]

Choosing not to defend oneself doesn't mean one isn't a victim. My one question is, why didn't Zev have fun torturing the hell out of that guy instead of just killing him? ;D

[decantate]

I think it's at least partly because Neria was pretty close to killing him with a spell combination, and Zev wanted at least part of the work of killing him.

And! Partly because they're both still secretly uncomfortable with how public their relationship has become with the Crows. Obviously that guy needed to die painfully, but because everyone was watching them, that guy died instantly instead. :D