hey, rosie_not_rose:

Mar 04, 2010 01:01

Okay. OKAY. I admit it. This was not the fic I wanted to post for the Christmas exchange. That one is a lot longer, but sitting very unfinished on my desktop. I'm having a lot of trouble just wrapping it up, and I don't think I am going to have any success at finishing it anytime soon. So, in a very unclassy move, I am admitting all this and ( Read more... )

fic: booth/brennan

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tempertemper March 4 2010, 13:30:54 UTC
This is just delicious! The atmosphere of the whole thing is wonderful.

I ♥ it. I'm sure Rosie will too!

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zerodetorres March 6 2010, 20:50:50 UTC
Thank youuu! ♥

Love your icon, too.

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tempertemper March 6 2010, 23:04:31 UTC
Aw, thank you - it's from this batch :) ♥

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somewhereapart March 4 2010, 17:19:30 UTC
*sigh* Oh, you. You and your way with words.

I am totally in love with these two this season, in a way I wasn't before. They're just delicious this year, with all their little episode-closing scenes, and I think you've definitely done them justice here.

I like that it just kind of... happened. Like they finally found the right moment, and he just took it and she let him.

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zerodetorres March 6 2010, 20:51:58 UTC
They are great this season, aren't they? I haven't had a chance to be around fandom much, but there's a new angle to them that makes me so happy. The episodes/cases have been better in quality, too. *cuddles my show*

And thank you! ♥

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lizook12 March 4 2010, 18:10:25 UTC
Oh, the feel and flow of this - their comfort with one another, the teasing, the natural move to the serious - is wonderful.

She touched the pad of her thumb to his jaw. "Me neither, Booth. Me neither."
♥ that action combined with her words. What a breathtaking image.

Thanks for putting a little bright spot in my day :)

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zerodetorres March 6 2010, 20:54:28 UTC
Thank you for your kind words, Liz. ♥ I'm so glad the flow worked for you. It's one of the things I worry most about when writing.

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rosie_not_rose March 4 2010, 18:48:18 UTC
LOOSI. ♥

I love this so much. It was definitely worth the wait.

A gust of warm air ghosted across his cheeks and chin, entrancing him. "Yeah." A pause, and he felt something shift in his chest. "I'm gonna kiss you, Bones."

NGUH OIHSFOAHOFASIF.

Just completely beautiful. THANK YOU!

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zerodetorres March 6 2010, 20:55:25 UTC
HAI. ♥

Sorry it wasn't the "original" one (which may still see the light of day!), but I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Merry very very very late Christmas. ;)

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dtotheaisy March 4 2010, 21:35:26 UTC
I love this too much. You are a wonderful writer and I always look forward to when to you write something new. Its so wonderful the way you made the story so beautiful and shippy but not too cheesy: it was just the right amount of lighthearted that their scenes on the show have.

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zerodetorres March 6 2010, 20:57:11 UTC
That's quite a compliment and so kind of you; thank you! ♥

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