Change, a Doctor Who fanfiction

[zero_ac]

Title: Change
Pairing: Shalka!Boys
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Doctor Who is not mine
Summary: Every word seemed to be rehearsed, every discussion a repeat, until something changed
Author's Notes: Short double drabble, because I couldn't bring myself to work on other fanfictions.

Comments

[neveralarch]

This is really cool. I like the idea of scripted conversations and what happens when one of them breaks off the rails.

[zero_ac]

Thank you :). To be honest, I got the idea of them not talking and perhaps having something like scripted conversations from one line in the Shalka-book, where it is stated that they never talk about emotional subjects, so I thought their conversations might turn a bit repetitive if they limit themselves...

[asthenie_vd]

Oooh yes yes yes. I love the theme of talking but not saying anything at all. And it fits those two so well! :D

[zero_ac]

Thank you :). It is so them, all Doctor/Master come to think of it, really.

[aralias]

ooh, i like. and i like it's shortness, but i'd also love to know how the master reacted to what was both an expression of caring for him and an acknowledgement of his personal rubbishness. what happens? what is the newness? moooore... please?

greedy reviewers. don'tya just hate them?

[zero_ac]

Thank you :). And no, I don't hate greedy reviewers ;). And I would love to write more, if I just had an idea how to continue...but I really don't. I just had that snippet in my mind, like a short clip and after the last line it ended. But if you have any ideas feel free to share them ;).

[evilawyer]

Aww, that's lovely!

[zero_ac]

Thank you :). Also I have to admit, I always find your comments to be lovely too :).

[asherescher]

Shivers at the end.

[zero_ac]

Thank you :)!