wrote it @ sk0ol...thinking about my awesome character...

[zer0space77]

Her eyes were watering and white smoke slowly started steaming out her nose. She started groaning in agony. Her legs thrashing wildly, her fingernails clawing at her killer’s leather gloves. Her blue cold eyes were now on fire with ache as she looked into her killer’s face and asked with her eyes for it to stop. She pleaded with her eyes, as the

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[kill_urself]

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[colorlife]

... so ur writing about a girl phsycopath... have u seen ur therapist lately? ;)

[starfox_pulpfic]

It's good. But haven't you written something...actually several things like this before? About killing people... it's strange but very interesting. I like it, but perhaps you should branch out a little. I hate putting critisism...I feel like a bithc. hahahah.

[zer0space77]

NO this is me branching out!!! all i write is friggin romance stories...always boy loves girl...girl hates boy...they have sex then...hate each other...then get married...same boring ass storyline everytime...
so now im going all Anne Rice and writing a crazy ass horror story because i never have before in my life...all the stories i have of horror are short and simple...i NEVER explore it!! soooo now i am... fuck my book.

[anonymous]

It seems really good.