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Jul 21, 2011 21:32

Title: See No Evil (10/?)
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i can't even..., fic: see no evil, supernatural fic

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thewakingsleep July 22 2011, 05:28:48 UTC
Well, shit.
What was that? Oh, that's right, the sound of the other shoe dropping. I'm saving the 'shit hitting the fan' metaphor for a Lucifer appearance.
Let me start at the beginning. I loved the banter between Dean, Sam, Gabriel, and Jimmy. Made me laugh. I should be reminded not to read in public. It tends to warrant strange looks when you burst out laughing randomly.
I loved the songs. I love Yiruma's music in general, and that you're using it as inspiration for these songs.
Now we get to the end...mah. I'm going to be troubled until I get another chapter. I want to know what's next!!! But that's half the fun as a writer, getting your audience to squirm in their seats in antici........pation. (Rocky Horror reference if you didn't catch it. :) Had to do it.)
The relationship that Dean and Cas have is still a little new, and this kind of thing will bruise it. I just hope it doesn't break it. But with your reassurances from my last comment, I'm sure now that I'll be seeing a happy ending for the two of them. But not until another climatic thing happens.
Alrighty, I'm gonna stop now. But just for your sadistic writer satisfaction, I'll have you know that I am squirming in my seat for the next chapter!

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