Things Change Pt. 4/?

[zeppogrl7]

updating Things Change. i already have the next chapter going too, but i just got to typing this one up. This one is gonna be a bit shorter than the previous ones have been

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[ponks19]

gah! you're using the layout that i want to use! but i don't know how to do it!

off to read now, will be back with comments :)

[ponks19]

told ya i'd be back!

loved it!

She stood up and put her hands on her hips, attempting to make herself appear more intimidating.

hehe superman stance! cam's so cute when she tries to be tough! very in character for her to stand and glare like that.

They didn’t make love or simply just have sex; they fucked.

HELLS YA!

I also really liked how she got him to just turn off his brain - stop thinking about it and just act!

[zeppogrl7]

lol i love your reactions, i always look forward to ur replies.

when i thought of that "fucked" line i was like "totally hot, have to use it"
and i know a lot of this stuff in this story is like cliche/borderline predictable but its pretty much House MD - The SoapOpera lol.
i just hope its not cheesy lol.

[ponks19]

as long as it's cheddar i'm okay with the cheese :P

[sgr11]

Yay! Another update! :)

I love the grown, stronger Cameron holding her stance in House's office... even though he called her out (and oh, so good!)!

She stood up and put her hands on her hips, attempting to make herself appear more intimidating. “
Love this visual... especially because she is so tiny compared to him!

What is he trying to do... she is married now... even if he doesn't think she loves her husband, what is he going to try to get her to leave him? Are we looking at him pulling another Stacey obsession?? Cameron is certainly not Stacey...

I love his recount of their first night together... how it all came together... their first sexual encounter... very nice! ;)

(I have to laugh because I have WIP that I wrote something similar... where it wasn't sex... it was fucking.. lol.) God they need that! ;)

Of course, looking forward to next part! ;)

[zeppogrl7]

yeah the whole stacy thing.. she's gonna make a comment about that. also gonna make a comment about her last name still being cameron.

pardon my ignorance =) but what is WIP and AU? i think thats the only ones i can think of that i dont understand... im sure there are more.

thanks so much for the comments =D you always leave awesome comments, im glad you're enjoying the story.

[sgr11]

yeah the whole stacy thing.. she's gonna make a comment about that. also gonna make a comment about her last name still being cameron.
Should be interesting! ;)

pardon my ignorance =) but what is WIP and AU? i think thats the only ones i can think of that i dont understand... im sure there are more.
Trust me, you're not alone! There are a whole bunch I don't know! like 'XD' and there's another which I can't think of right now, oh, 'pwnd'! lol "WIP" is Work-in-Progress, and I believe "AU" is Alternate Universe. If you know the definition for the other two, please let me know! (seriously!).

thanks so much for the comments =D you always leave awesome comments, im glad you're enjoying the story.
You're ver welcome! I'm leaving 'awesome' comments just for what I find! ;) I look forward to your next part! ;)

[zeppogrl7]

thanks for clearing those up for me lol. unless XD means 2 things, i know that it usually is used for a big smile with the eyes shut. and i think pwnd is like owned, like.. not sure how to explain that.. like along the lines of someone making a fool out of u 'he got pwnd!'
i might be wrong but i think thats what it means lol.

[mythici]

Loved the glimpse into how it all started. Especially the intial kiss and him telling her to stop smiling... :)

[zeppogrl7]

thanks for the comment =] dan is common because since i write fanfic, the characters already have personalities. my own characters are usually more boring lol =D
im glad you're liking the fic =]