Digital Devil Saga: A War With Such Casualties (Gale/Lupa, Gale/others, 1/1)

May 03, 2010 15:59

Author: Chiara (zephyrocity, zephyrian)
Pairing(s)/Main Character(s): Gale/Lupa, Gale/Cielo, Gale/Heat, Gale/Roland. References to others.
Rating: Light R
Length: ~6,000 words
Spoilers: For safety's sake, through the end of Digital Devil Saga 2.
Disclaimer: Digital Devil Saga belongs to Atlus!
Summary: In his experience, most things ended in death.

In his experience, most things ended in death. )

character: lupa, pairing: gale/roland, character: roland, character: gale, pairing: gale/lupa, game: digital devil saga, rating: r, pairing: gale/cielo, character: cielo, type: slash, word count: 5000-10000, character: heat, pairing: gale/heat

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danse_amore February 1 2011, 15:18:41 UTC
Character notes character notes, about Heat mostly:

"I wanted that. I've wanted this for a long time," Heat said, and Gale nearly told him that he couldn't have, that he was lying; nearly, because this new Heat lied often and seemed untroubled by it. He told Sera it was all right when it clearly was not; he repeatedly insisted that he was uninjured when he was close to collapse.

"I am sorry," he said, because he thought he might understand on some level that he could not quite reach. Heat did not want to hear that he was the one who had been indulged, and not the other way around.

uncontrolled and unreachable

Also this liiiine: It scorched his throat, tasted like the poison rival tribes had been so good at concocting, but it distracted him from the water dripping down his cheeks. He dragged a hand across his face, rubbing the moisture away, and drew in a calming breath. It sounded nothing like he had expected: rough and thready, a thin little sob.
and by line I mean paragraaaaph

Poor poor Roland, as well. Gale thought of Lupa's eyes and tongue and teeth, and then he hiked his free foot around Roland's waist, arching, and fitted his hands to Roland's jaw to pull them even closer together.

Anyway. Finally, this. Even more, he wanted to wind his hands in Lupa's long hair and tell him that this was the closest they would ever come to a true Nirvana, death the nearest to peace, and then he wanted to press himself against Lupa until they were one being.

Basically, I really adore this forever! SO. I hope your favorite lines are in here somewhere?

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zephyrocity February 3 2011, 08:16:04 UTC
A+

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