well,since i read it all now,and didn't leave any comment (sorry for that,i read it in offline-reading mode that's why i couldn't) i decided to make full report about the 3 arcs,first of all,otsukaresama deshita you sure went through a lot in it :) (sorry again for only reading not helping XD) well,let's start
at first arc,to be honest i was surprised to see yama-chan a brat type,it was always yuto who was like that in all fanfics i read so it was really somehow hard to imagine,but i managed slowly and found it cute and the fact that yuto was really an idiot here was funny :D specially that sentence from yama-chan,about that eggs and ...(really forgot)tastes the same everywhere ,made me laugh.
to think that akanishi kun was an enemy made me confused as well,and hikaru's death made me sad for a minute there even though that he never appeared in that arc.(yabuhika effects XD)
by the way why yama-chan always go through troubles and yuto never be there in time? and the continuous fevers ....-sigh- well,whatever
through arc 2 and 3 ,i hardly tried to imagine yama-chan's parents and luna and in the end...i never succeeded XD but i could see someone in my mind
i'm grateful to you as well for making an appearance for -nishikido ryo kun -yamashita tomohisa kun -tegoshi yuya kun -masuda takahisa kun and to be honest,you fanfic was a mystery in the end :) to try to guess who is talking ...
Note: i didn't mean to be rude but your English skills have improved a LOT in the latest chapter....it was really hard to read the first arc really didn't mean to be rude ,but that's a good thing that you improved ;)
another late congratulation for your novel :) i read the comments as well
to be honest,it was the longest and the best fanfic i have ever read. because if it wasn't that good,i wouldn't be able to go this far until now
don't be disappointed about anything,and go forward as you always do ;)
now that comment is really very long and i know that you actually love long ones,but i ,myself got tired of writing XD
Re: full reportzeon_avalantheSeptember 5 2015, 06:09:59 UTC
Wow! That is, one long comment there.. O.o But me loves long comment so let me give you some hugs!
Thank you! This was a long journey for me but I had great fun writing them.. And really, the fact that someone is actually reading my stories are more than enough help for me.. It gave me motivation to keep on writing.. :)
Well, Yama-chan has always been the mature one (in both real-life and most of fics I've known), so for once, I wanted to try mixing his seemingly mature persona with brattiness which could only come from selected background.. Yuto still has his childishness here, but let's say he's more composed than Yama-chan in a whole.. Well, I took quite a heavy and dark theme for this serie, so I thought of leaving some joke remarks here and there to keep readers (and myself) from bursting out of the heaviness.. *grins*
Well, I need an enemy, and Jin -with his history and all- kinda fit into the image properly, so there you go.. No offense though! I was once a Jin's fan myself.. As for Hikaru, well, after reading the whole story, I'm sure you figure out what had actually happened to him.. :D
Let's say that Yamada is what you call 'trouble'.. Like every protagonists in every story, they were bound to get in trouble, and their side-kick (or partner, or whoever) tend to come too late to their rescue.. (or perhaps it was just my sadistic tendency to hurt my protagonists.. Fufufufufu)
All my OC were inspired from real-life people actually.. It's just I was too lazy to give the explanations and left their portrayal to the readers' imagination.. *shot* But just in case you're wondering, Yamada-mama's image was taken from Suzuki Kyoka (the one who acted as Yamada's mum in Risou no Musuko) and the father's image came from Ito Hideaki (the man who played the psychopath-teacher in Aku No Kyoten).. As for Luna, well, I wonder.. She just came eventually and I don't even think when I put her character.. *sheepishlaugh*
I just love putting some random characters in my stories.. The same goes for the NEWS (and exes) fellows.. Fufufufu~
Don't be guilty! I was practically laughing my ass off when I read my earlier stories! I mean, my grammar was ridiculous even I -the author- had a really hard time wondering what I meant back then.. English is not my first languange, so I could only be grateful to have known this fanfic world which helps me improve my English gradually..
Thank you! Though the novel is moving stagnantly because real-life sucks and I just can't find my muse.. *sighs*
Aww~ I don't think this was that good, but thank you for following the story up until the end!
Sure I will..
And yeah, I know how tiring writing a long comment can get, but I love you still! And I love your comments too!
i decided to make full report about the 3 arcs,first of all,otsukaresama deshita you sure went through a lot in it :) (sorry again for only reading not helping XD)
well,let's start
at first arc,to be honest i was surprised to see yama-chan a brat type,it was always yuto who was like that in all fanfics i read
so it was really somehow hard to imagine,but i managed slowly and found it cute
and the fact that yuto was really an idiot here was funny :D
specially that sentence from yama-chan,about that eggs and ...(really forgot)tastes the same everywhere ,made me laugh.
to think that akanishi kun was an enemy made me confused as well,and hikaru's death made me sad for a minute there even though that he never appeared in that arc.(yabuhika effects XD)
by the way why yama-chan always go through troubles and yuto never be there in time?
and the continuous fevers ....-sigh- well,whatever
through arc 2 and 3 ,i hardly tried to imagine yama-chan's parents and luna
and in the end...i never succeeded XD
but i could see someone in my mind
i'm grateful to you as well for making an appearance for
-nishikido ryo kun
-yamashita tomohisa kun
-tegoshi yuya kun
-masuda takahisa kun
and to be honest,you fanfic was a mystery in the end :) to try to guess who is talking ...
Note: i didn't mean to be rude but your English skills have improved a LOT
in the latest chapter....it was really hard to read the first arc
really didn't mean to be rude ,but that's a good thing that you improved ;)
another late congratulation for your novel :) i read the comments as well
to be honest,it was the longest and the best fanfic i have ever read.
because if it wasn't that good,i wouldn't be able to go this far until now
don't be disappointed about anything,and go forward as you always do ;)
now that comment is really very long and i know that you actually love long ones,but i ,myself got tired of writing XD
one more time Otsukaresama~~
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But me loves long comment so let me give you some hugs!
Thank you! This was a long journey for me but I had great fun writing them.. And really, the fact that someone is actually reading my stories are more than enough help for me.. It gave me motivation to keep on writing.. :)
Well, Yama-chan has always been the mature one (in both real-life and most of fics I've known), so for once, I wanted to try mixing his seemingly mature persona with brattiness which could only come from selected background.. Yuto still has his childishness here, but let's say he's more composed than Yama-chan in a whole..
Well, I took quite a heavy and dark theme for this serie, so I thought of leaving some joke remarks here and there to keep readers (and myself) from bursting out of the heaviness.. *grins*
Well, I need an enemy, and Jin -with his history and all- kinda fit into the image properly, so there you go.. No offense though! I was once a Jin's fan myself.. As for Hikaru, well, after reading the whole story, I'm sure you figure out what had actually happened to him.. :D
Let's say that Yamada is what you call 'trouble'.. Like every protagonists in every story, they were bound to get in trouble, and their side-kick (or partner, or whoever) tend to come too late to their rescue.. (or perhaps it was just my sadistic tendency to hurt my protagonists.. Fufufufufu)
All my OC were inspired from real-life people actually.. It's just I was too lazy to give the explanations and left their portrayal to the readers' imagination.. *shot*
But just in case you're wondering, Yamada-mama's image was taken from Suzuki Kyoka (the one who acted as Yamada's mum in Risou no Musuko) and the father's image came from Ito Hideaki (the man who played the psychopath-teacher in Aku No Kyoten).. As for Luna, well, I wonder.. She just came eventually and I don't even think when I put her character.. *sheepishlaugh*
I just love putting some random characters in my stories.. The same goes for the NEWS (and exes) fellows.. Fufufufu~
Don't be guilty! I was practically laughing my ass off when I read my earlier stories! I mean, my grammar was ridiculous even I -the author- had a really hard time wondering what I meant back then..
English is not my first languange, so I could only be grateful to have known this fanfic world which helps me improve my English gradually..
Thank you! Though the novel is moving stagnantly because real-life sucks and I just can't find my muse.. *sighs*
Aww~ I don't think this was that good, but thank you for following the story up until the end!
Sure I will..
And yeah, I know how tiring writing a long comment can get, but I love you still! And I love your comments too!
Thank you for your support!
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