Fic: you are the one, the one that lies close to me

[zenelly]

Title: you are the one, the one that lies close to me
Pairing: Zemyx
Disclaimer: KH isn't mine, won't be mine.
Rating: Oh bby, oh bby, NC-17 like woah.
Summary: Done for this prompt here at the KH kink meme. Deciding to de-anon here, I guess.

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Comments

[eraserfish]

ZEMYX PORN. YAY. I have been deprived, okay.
I love how submissive Demyx is and how bad he wants it (because I can relate. I have been deprived of my Zemyx porn for far too long okay). ♥ And I won't rant anymore about how much I love your writing because I'm pretty sure I've told you far too many times already.

And this is great for your second attempt at porn, okaaaay.

[zenelly]

AHAHAHAHA, of all the places to come for porn, this is where it ended.

Demyx being submissive is hella hot. And I'm not gonna lie, I like hearing people tell me what they like about my writing. ^^

>.> God, so embarrassed, though the one I was posting about being mortified about was the Seifer/Hayner one...

[yurameki_tenshi]

I would call that an excellent second attempt~ This was delicious~ <3

[zenelly]

Thank you very much!! ♥

[onemoreparadise]

(Ahahahahah, second ever attempt at writing porn, excuse me while I hide over here (and post my third attempt)

No complaints here. I loved dominant master!Zexion. (And to be honest I've never written a full porn scene either, only role played my half of it, which may or may not be 50 times more uncomfortable... but equally as enjoyable).

[zenelly]

^^ Thank you very much!! (Augh, I've done that over MSN so often that I don't even blink at that anymore. But writing it on my own was embarrassing as fuck.)

Attempt?

[xtorchlightx]

I would say you succeeded rather well.

Loving submissive!Demyx. Not enough of that online, in all honesty. (Everyone say's what they write is Zemyx, but this is true Zemyx. Pretty much everything else out there is Dexion.)

No typos that I can see, and very entertaining. Keep up the good work! *\^w^/* <-- Cheerleader w/ pom poms.

Re: Attempt?

[zenelly]

Thank you!

Sub!Demyx and Dom!Zexion are pretty much a nice break for me, because I do write Zemyx (as in, Zexion taking the more dominant role sexually) but Demyx has always been the more forward one, since he's more impetuous. Some of my stories have slanted it towards the Dexion side, to be fair.

I will, thank you!

[theplumtomato]

Dear lord, for only a second time, this is fantastic. I'm kind of melty and gooey, I absolutely love love sub!Demyx and dom!Zexion. And this was so well done and really hot and just wow *applauds* Nicely done, darling, this is fantastical <3

[zenelly]

Sub!Dem is something that people need more of. It gets a little neglected at times.

Thank you again! I'm glad you enjoy it!

[theplumtomato]

I won't lie to you, sub!Demyx is my canon or Zemyx. Zexion might be shorter, but Demyx is way too adorable and fluffy and Zexion (in my head-canon) is a dominant BAMF.
And enjoy it I did *rubs hands together like the perverted old woman I am*

[zenelly]

In my head, Demyx is more ... forward and initiative, since he's less emotionally constipated, but Zexion is totes in control. He will not tolerate your bullshit. *Zexion stare*

Hey, hey, if you're a perverted old woman, then I'm just... ...Actually, wait, we might be the same age. *college ftw?*