9. Axel will always be just on the nicer side of being a complete jackass. He's much more entertaining this way.
Isn't that how Axel is in the game? I would think that's just good characterization.
Anyway, I have read this story of yours and I loved it. I actually would have liked to see it go down a darker road (Demyx getting hit by the car) because it totally would have freaked Zexion out to the extreme. Most of my fanfictions take the lighter road at the end, but for some reason I enjoy not everything ending perfectly happy. I like things being happy for a while and then get completely destroyed >:3
Maybe I'm just weird and sadistic and love character torture. I did love the ending to your story though. The scene where Demyx carried Zex back to his room was precious. I also thought it was very creative how you added a back story to Axel's eye tattoos.
Isn't that how Axel is in the game? I would think that's just good characterization
Precisely! But sometimes people forget that he's a manipulative bastard to put even Zexion to shame, so I try and make him what he is.
Thank you! I would have liked it to do something darker too, but I just could not think of a good way to do that without it coming off as completely cliche. And it was cliche central, let me tell you that. Having not everything end happily makes the story seem so much more realistic (and I think this is one of the reasons I like Mnemonic so much
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Precisely! But sometimes people forget that he's a manipulative bastard to put even Zexion to shame, so I try and make him what he is..... Thank you .____
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Defenestration definitely falls into my list of favourite words. C:< ((Though I can't remember where you use it in the story. *read it quite awhile ago*))
So, that basically means I don't really have further questions, since I can't remember in detail . . . I'm sure I've had some questions, so I'll probably go through it and ask. (('Cuz I'd like to find out if I did have questions . . .))
But yeah. Thanks for this! It was interesting to read and know these little fact things. xD
Pfft, the song thing was supposed to be a secret? I even I, blonde in all but hair color, figured that out. I also knew that Zex freaked because of the whole car-crash thing; though I didn't know that he couldn't drive.
...Yeah, if you haven't figured out who I am with only a 1 letter username difference; I'm afraid you might just be dumber than me. A better writer, but still dumber. XD
It wasn't supposed to be secret, per say. Just... not exactly obvious. And besides, the entire playlist wasn't used, so.... *shrugs* And the Zexion getting freaked out because of the accident... well, I had a few reviews that were wondering why he freaked. I just decided to add that in there just in case.
(I AM NOT DUMB, I FIGURED IT OUT IMMEDIATELY, AND I AM GLAD THAT YOU ARE UP HERE NOW!!)
*shrug* Well, it had been a while, and honestly, I didn't expect them to reread chapters every time I updated the story, so it makes a sort of sense. The people who read it after I was done had a much better memory of that event.
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Isn't that how Axel is in the game? I would think that's just good characterization.
Anyway, I have read this story of yours and I loved it. I actually would have liked to see it go down a darker road (Demyx getting hit by the car) because it totally would have freaked Zexion out to the extreme. Most of my fanfictions take the lighter road at the end, but for some reason I enjoy not everything ending perfectly happy. I like things being happy for a while and then get completely destroyed >:3
Maybe I'm just weird and sadistic and love character torture. I did love the ending to your story though. The scene where Demyx carried Zex back to his room was precious. I also thought it was very creative how you added a back story to Axel's eye tattoos.
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Precisely! But sometimes people forget that he's a manipulative bastard to put even Zexion to shame, so I try and make him what he is.
Thank you! I would have liked it to do something darker too, but I just could not think of a good way to do that without it coming off as completely cliche. And it was cliche central, let me tell you that. Having not everything end happily makes the story seem so much more realistic (and I think this is one of the reasons I like Mnemonic so much ( ... )
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So, that basically means I don't really have further questions, since I can't remember in detail . . . I'm sure I've had some questions, so I'll probably go through it and ask. (('Cuz I'd like to find out if I did have questions . . .))
But yeah. Thanks for this! It was interesting to read and know these little fact things. xD
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Eeeeeeeeeehhhhhhhh, ask away. Ask anything. Seriously, I'll try and give an answer.
Welcome! I thought that it would be an interesting read!
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Oh, I will. ((Once I find something to ask. Lol.))
And that it was~!
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...Yeah, if you haven't figured out who I am with only a 1 letter username difference; I'm afraid you might just be dumber than me. A better writer, but still dumber. XD
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(I AM NOT DUMB, I FIGURED IT OUT IMMEDIATELY, AND I AM GLAD THAT YOU ARE UP HERE NOW!!)
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(PFFT. YOU BET YOU ARE.)
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((DXXX
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