This is a crappy day...so have one of these

[zen_duelist]

...Criticism...

Poetry is too much rhyme:
A slower version of wrap,
and to tell you the truth,
I think it's all just...
Interesting beyond spoken words,
though sometimes just by luck
it actually makes a statement;
but I don't give a...
Thought to the meter or rhythm.
I try my best ignoring it.
The vocabulary is the cool stuff;
the rest is just boring...
Grammer and technicalities,
though I think that it can pass
for intellectual flatulence
spewing out your...
Mouth in rather vast quantities.
Lyrics are the simple trick;
leading them closer with words,
to make them suck my...
Meaning straight off the paper,
and if I had the means,
I'd satisfy my curiosity
by getting into your...
Head to see what your thinking,
and if you have sharp, quick wits,
but as far as I can tell,
you do have a nice set of...
Eyes that shine in the moonlight,
and span the distance between us.
Would you do me a favor
and grab ahold of my...
Pencil because my hand is cramping,
and I don't usually write this... long
but I can see you're impressed with my...diction,
and the size of my, uh, paragraphs.