Comments | zempasuchil: Riders on the Storm 6. Part III: Dean

zempasuchil

Riders on the Storm 6. Part III: Dean

Jul 08, 2013 19:34

( and Father said That's sad too people cannot do anything that dreadful they cannot do anything very dreadful at all they cannot even remember tomorrow what seemed dreadful today and I said, You can shirk all things and he said, Ah can you. ― William Faulkner, The Sound and the Fury )

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dear_tiger July 10 2013, 06:14:56 UTC

\o/ This was so awesome! And I totally read it in one go because one of the wonderful things about your writing is that it's like poetry and it sets up this emotional atmosphere that I don't want to break for anything until the story is over. It has a momentum, and it pulls me along, and that's such a joy when you stories go and drag me through the wilderness, seriously :D You write about all these beautiful places, and then I have to go and look them up. And all these books that I have to go and look up too. I just love getting so wrapped up in your fic for a few hours ( ... )

sleepypercy July 10 2013, 06:52:00 UTC

I am so in love with this story! Especially Sam's dreams, which are written so beautifully with a perfect mix of Sam's thoughts and fears. And that building sexual tension between them was wonderful, just so nicely paced and believable.

And oh man, that Faulkner reference... (I have such mixed feelings about As I Lay Dying, but it is nevertheless seared into my soul) which was in so many ways perfect in that moment.

That tie-in at the end is so wonderful, the hounds from the Hunter, and Sam and Dean getting to join in the hunt at the end was amazing. I just love that almost separated-from-body feeling I got when I read about them running with the Hunter's pack.

jasmineisland July 10 2013, 20:27:55 UTC

The visuals in this are awesome. The push pull between the boys is SO intense.
Amazing

soncnica July 13 2013, 14:36:13 UTC

I really loved this. Especially the whole "summer, cabin" section, it was ... idk, idk how to describe it, it was just .... lovely, descriptive, summer like, brother(ly), idk :-) but I loved it :-)

And I loved this push pull dynamic, wrong, right, yes, no that you so awesomely described throughout the story!

Enjoyed this, tnx for sharing!

S.

frankie98 July 14 2013, 21:38:32 UTC

You write so well. I don't usually read such long fics without some sort of recommendation, but I sampled yours and was hooked by the premise of guilty/furtive wincestuous desires and lovely storytelling. I could attribute every thought you gave the boys to the way they're written on the show and your progression through their cases was smooth and compelling in the added details of their intimate feelings. Thanks!