Beta request!
Would anyone in TS be able to do a last minute final beta on my TSBB story?
The story is: * 25,000 words (it's a big one, but it is a Big Bang!)
* slash/explicit
* contains mild torture (mostly nonphysical, e.g. sensory deprivation)
* features both Brackett and Alex (so strong senses of those voices is a plus)
* features both past and present tense (a major source of possible mistakes--"Why are you in present tense for one sentence here?")
I've had a couple people look at drafts, so now I'm mostly looking for polishing type stuff (missing words, confusing sentences, typos, etc) but plot holes and general suggestions would also be welcome. The main concern is time. I'm not sure which day I'll be posting yet, but the earliest possible deadline for the story is November 1, so if you have time in the next few days that would be great! Originally posted at http://zelempa.dreamwidth.org/72968.html (
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The story is: * 25,000 words (it's a big one, but it is a Big Bang!)
* slash/explicit
* contains mild torture (mostly nonphysical, e.g. sensory deprivation)
* features both Brackett and Alex (so strong senses of those voices is a plus)
* features both past and present tense (a major source of possible mistakes--"Why are you in present tense for one sentence here?")
I've had a couple people look at drafts, so now I'm mostly looking for polishing type stuff (missing words, confusing sentences, typos, etc) but plot holes and general suggestions would also be welcome. The main concern is time. I'm not sure which day I'll be posting yet, but the earliest possible deadline for the story is November 1, so if you have time in the next few days that would be great! Originally posted at http://zelempa.dreamwidth.org/72968.html (
comments)