Comments | zeldaophelia: FIC: 8 seconds of eternity (CSI:NY; Flack, Angell)

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FIC: 8 seconds of eternity (CSI:NY; Flack, Angell)

Feb 08, 2009 19:17

Title: 8 seconds of eternity
Author: Zelda Ophelia (zeldaophelia)
Fandom/Character: CSI: NY; Flack, Angell
General info: Not mine; T (violence and language)
Notes: Thank you to failegaiden and jaydenbell for the betas! *glomps* For the 8 second challenge, prompts were "Flack/Angell, in the line of duty".
Summary: Pre-series. Before she joined homicide, Flack and Angell worked a ( Read more... )

fic challenge: 8 seconds, tv: csi:ny, fic: csiny, fic

Comments 10

afteriwake February 9 2009, 02:13:03 UTC

I really liked this a lot. I loved how you switched from one POV to another, and the ending was just great. I'd like to see more 8 second fics from you, to be honest.

zeldaophelia February 11 2009, 02:26:50 UTC

Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing it!

I've written some more, but the rest are all short so I posted them as comment!fic. I'll compile everything over here after the challenge closes. :D

love_kate_walsh February 9 2009, 10:08:50 UTC

Loved it! Great work.

zeldaophelia February 11 2009, 02:27:19 UTC

Thank you!

pegasuspup February 9 2009, 14:38:48 UTC

Good pacing, excellent writing. Very nice!

zeldaophelia February 11 2009, 02:28:19 UTC

Thank you very much! This was a lot of fun to play with.

Psst: BTW, are you on Ravelry? I think I've seen that Ravatar in the CSI group.

pegasuspup February 11 2009, 02:46:29 UTC

LOL - yes I'm upchuckypuppy on ravelry. Who are you?

I suppose I need to get some CSI icons now- gotta branch out of SGA fandom.

zeldaophelia February 12 2009, 02:44:59 UTC

:)) I was wondering. I'm zeldaophelia over there too. :D

joyfulfeather February 9 2009, 15:39:02 UTC

*flail* So, so good. I really love this. Them working together, both so young! At least in terms of the job. But both doing the job and doing well at it. Just... I love it. Fantastic fic. <3

zeldaophelia February 11 2009, 02:30:31 UTC

Thank you! I like the idea of them having working together before really meeting in homicide. Since she was just promoted to Homicide in S3, I can totally see her as a uniform officer on some of his scenes. Just enough for him to be able to recognize her and put a name to her face, but not know her well. (I like the idea so much it's come up in another fic I'm working on. :D)