Child Of Grace: Chapter 40 - Child Of Fate (Part 1)

Oct 23, 2010 01:05

ZeldaQueen: Hello everyone, and welcome to another exciting horrendous boring as hell GODDAMMED INFURIATING sporking of Child of Grace! We're starting Holly's fourth year and boy howdy, is it a doozy! The only saving grace is that the suethor hasn't updated since she finished this year, so this very well may be the last of it. Or not. Only time ( Read more... )

chapter 40, part 1, suethor: lady azar de tameran, child of fate, fic: child of grace

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madamchaos October 23 2010, 19:01:21 UTC
Ugh.

Hey, Suethor? When you ruin half the mysteries in the first chapter, and then ruin the other half before you've reached the midway point, you're doing it wrong.

I don't feel an ounce of sympathy for Riddle, considering that he won't lift a finger to stop his "evil seventh of a soul" or wahtever.

Your having said this gives me vague hope that, by the end of this sordid saga, Holly finds herself having killed Voldemort and rid herself of his Horcrux, only to turn around and see memory!Tom about to kill her because he's the final horcrux, and she realizes what a naive idiot she'd been.

I mean obviously it won't happen because that might actually be interested, but... hey, if she doesn't continue the fic, I can pretend whatever I wanted happened at the end. ^_^

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zelda_queen October 23 2010, 22:21:25 UTC
"Your having said this gives me vague hope that, by the end of this sordid saga, Holly finds herself having killed Voldemort and rid herself of his Horcrux, only to turn around and see memory!Tom about to kill her because he's the final horcrux, and she realizes what a naive idiot she'd been.

I mean obviously it won't happen because that might actually be interested, but... hey, if she doesn't continue the fic, I can pretend whatever I wanted happened at the end. ^_^"

That would be perfect! I mean, hey, Tom Riddle's defining trait was that he was creepily good at acting kind and loving and friendly. In the second book, he was thrilled to have the chance to lie to Harry and trick him. If he were canon, I could see him going "Oh ho ho, it's the Girl Who Lived! And she already has Slytherin sympathies! I can play her for all she's worth, convince her to separate herself from Dumbledore and anyone else who'd turn her against me, and then use her for my own ends!"

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turtlecrackers October 24 2010, 10:12:51 UTC
I would love to read that, actually. That would be one epic plot twist in this story of Fail.

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anakinnotvader October 24 2010, 15:37:50 UTC
Once you finish sporking this pile of garbage, I will write you that fic in celebration. :)

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zelda_queen October 24 2010, 16:19:46 UTC
Really? Thank you! :D

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