The Gang: Chapter 6 - All Revealed

Sep 28, 2012 21:54



ZeldaQueen: WARNING! THIS CHAPTER CONTAINS AN UNDERAGE GIRL PULLING OFF HER BROTHER'S UNDERPANTS AND EXPOSING HIS JUNK TO THE WORLD, WHILE LAUGHING AT HIS MISFORTUNE! IT ALSO CONTAINS A DIFFERENT UNDERAGE GIRL GIVING SAID BROTHER A BLOWJOB! DON'T READ THIS IF SHARP IMPLEMENTS ARE AROUND!
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nsfw, the fic: the gang, guest sporker: raxis, all revealed, suethor: neil, cosporking, chapter 6

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katistrophe June 29 2013, 18:29:22 UTC
Ergh. The chapter title's bad enough - "All Revealed" sounds like "Hogwarts Exposed", or maybe "Benedict's Junk Revealed". (Benedict is about the least appropriate name for that guy. How 'bout Maledict?)

Victoria: Nothing will happen if you snitch on us, "we take precautions."
Do they have a brain-washed squad of killer kids, or can Victoria control drones from her laptop?

“I’m an expert. What can I say?” said Victoria with a grin.
TMI, girl. T-M-Fucking-I.

“Yes” said Victoria, she leaned close to Alison and whispered in her ear “Blow job” Alison opened her mouth wide in surprise and immediately looked over at Emily who nodded to her.
A- buh- whuh- AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH! HE'S TWELVE! SHE'S... ALSO TWELVE! I GUESS! I CAN'T TURN OFF THE ALLCAPS! I'M GONNA KILL NEIL! I'LL STICK A RED-HOT POKER UP HIS REAR! I'LL POUR MOLTEN LEAD UP HIS NOSE! I'LL FLAY HIS MICROSCOPIC DICK! AND THEN I'LL PUT NETTLES ON IT! AND WASH THEM OFF WITH BOILING WATER! I'LL POUR ACID OVER HIM! I'LL... DO A LOT MORE HORRIBLE THINGS, AND KEEP HIM ALIVE DURING THAT, AND THEN MAYBE I'LL ACTUALLY KILL HIM!
...isn't it nice to get in touch with your inner psycho?

“Like we showed you” said Victoria.
Like they showed her? LIKE THEY FUCKING SHOWED HER?! I WANT TO KILL THEM ALL! I'LL SET THEIR SEX DEN ON FIRE AND WATCH THEM BURN!

It means we’re all bonded together, like a family, only closer.
LIKE A FUCKING FAMILY. ...Bad choice of words, very bad. BUT STILL THAT IS NOT HOW A FAMILY SHOULD WORK!

Think of all the fun we’re going to have together.
Think of all the girls we're going to rape together, is what she means.

"Think of all the lovely girls you’re going to see stripped off and naked”
Called it. Boy, do I hate being right.

Where’s that girl? Can we strip her?” asked Ben finally.
FUCK. BENEDICT. I was starting to feel sorry for him, at least a bit, a tiny bit, but it's all gone now. Now I want him to DIE.

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