It couldn't be more obvious that Patch is one evil motherfucker and is basically mindfucking Nora somehow, yet she still uses excuse after excuse like every Sue does for the arrogant and creepy Stu >.< Oh, because he's hawt it's perfectly fine for him to harass and attack girls...
And I totally agree about Nora's mum. You'd think she'd still be dealing with her husband's death and it would draw her more closer to her daughter and probably even more protective of her, not wanting her out of her sight for too long. It truly is irresponsible that she leaves he daughter alone so often. And wouldn't the school have to notify Nora's mum about her therapy appointments and if there were a change in counsellor at the school, even attend these appointments often? Just a thought… Look, I'm not against a writer writing about a poor family structure and about kids who don't get along with their parents, just as long as it has substance to it, is all.
A better story would be Nora trying to fight the guy invading her mind and trying to resist the power and how she overcomes this, maybe?
You know in my spork of Vampire Kisses, the idiots in the story thought they ran over a deer, too, when it was in fact the Vamp Stu… :P
I think we're expected to like Patch for that. It seems that Fitzpatrick is under the impression that those are appealing qualities. I, personally, am speechless.
Oh, we later find out exactly how idiotic the school is in regards to Ms Greene. >_< If these people had any sense of security or protection, none of this would go down. This entire plot only works because no one takes threats the least bit seriously.
"You know in my spork of Vampire Kisses, the idiots in the story thought they ran over a deer, too, when it was in fact the Vamp Stu… :P"
Well, Raven didn't seem like the brightest bulb in the socket. XD
And I totally agree about Nora's mum. You'd think she'd still be dealing with her husband's death and it would draw her more closer to her daughter and probably even more protective of her, not wanting her out of her sight for too long. It truly is irresponsible that she leaves he daughter alone so often. And wouldn't the school have to notify Nora's mum about her therapy appointments and if there were a change in counsellor at the school, even attend these appointments often? Just a thought… Look, I'm not against a writer writing about a poor family structure and about kids who don't get along with their parents, just as long as it has substance to it, is all.
A better story would be Nora trying to fight the guy invading her mind and trying to resist the power and how she overcomes this, maybe?
You know in my spork of Vampire Kisses, the idiots in the story thought they ran over a deer, too, when it was in fact the Vamp Stu… :P
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Oh, we later find out exactly how idiotic the school is in regards to Ms Greene. >_< If these people had any sense of security or protection, none of this would go down. This entire plot only works because no one takes threats the least bit seriously.
"You know in my spork of Vampire Kisses, the idiots in the story thought they ran over a deer, too, when it was in fact the Vamp Stu… :P"
Well, Raven didn't seem like the brightest bulb in the socket. XD
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