[fic] Survivor's Guilt, somewhat.

Oct 17, 2010 01:19

Title: Survivor's Guilt, somewhat.
Fandom: Supernatural.
Rating: NC-17.
Pairings/Characters: Lucifer/Gabriel + Michael.
Word Count: 1,382~ words.
Summary: In Hell's cage, Gabriel makes a visit because he got a day-pass from God.
Note: moorishflower went around on twitter demanding more Lucifer smut. I realized I had exactly one fic fitting this description. So ( Read more... )

spn:gabriel/lucifer, spn fic, spn:michael, spn:gabriel, spn:lucifer, fic

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jabber_moose October 17 2010, 05:31:11 UTC
Devoured this. Extreme hotness aside (no pun intended), there are so many aspects of this that stand out.

The chill of Hell (as per Dante, as well as Lucifer's comment about hell being cold) in comparison to the heat that Gabriel brings.

You brought that sadness, that loneliness, that.. lost -ness between Gabriel and Lucifer, with the addition of homg hot.

I love how Michael is portrayed as somewhat of the outsider- more prone to following direction than letting himself go like Gabriel and Lucifer.

I also saw this as something of a reunion piece between Michael, Gabriel, and Lucifer- something that just...needed to happen.

I loved the comment, in the same sense, about it not being the hell they knew, but with his brothers there, it was still somehow home.

♥♥

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zekkass October 17 2010, 05:35:44 UTC
<3 Thank you! You always bring the best comments. I do my darndest to write PWP, but the characters can't help but bring plot and details to it, so all's for the better, I suppose. ;)

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mithrel October 17 2010, 05:48:11 UTC
Awwww! This was so...well, not cute exactly, but hopeful, and I love the fact that there's a bit of Lucifer/Michael in there as well as Lucifer/Gabriel. Also, since I'm anal and I haven't read the Inferno since high school before I even read this fic I looked it up to figure out what circle you based it on. Figured it was treachery, but I wasn't dure.

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zekkass October 17 2010, 05:50:42 UTC
Yup, you're right! I figure the cage is either very close to where the Inferno says Satan is imprisoned or right there, so you are correct. :)

Thank you!

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moorishflower October 17 2010, 14:19:39 UTC
;-; Awwwwww! I mean yes it was hot, amazingly hot, but omg Lucifer, so sad. And so glad when Gabriel visits him!

Lol, sorry for demanding fic, but you offered? And I really liked this~ <3<3<3

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zekkass October 17 2010, 16:16:52 UTC
The angels need hugs, I say. *hugs them*

Do not apologize for demanding fic! It was a good excuse to expand my own pairing lists (someday my tag list will have a pairing tag for every combination of angel...) and yes, I did offer. Twas fun! :D

Thanks!

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origamicage October 23 2010, 21:28:41 UTC
Awwww. I can feel the aching loneliness, especially of Michael.

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zekkass October 23 2010, 21:30:20 UTC
Thanks!

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