Oh wow, Zef, I'm so impressed that you tackled this straight away! *claps* Lookit you go! :D
I think a lot of us have the idea that Ulquiorra could switch his allegiance. This is an interesting take at how that might happen, and how things might be for him if he does.
Love the little contest between the two. It's subtle and fun, and speaks a great deal without any words at all.
Edit: Oops, forgot to add, I think you meant "Seireitei" and not "Serengeti"? ;)
Eh, I already had the first page done beforehand - it was easier than some of my stuff that's basically starting from scratch. :)
It does seem like something that could happen, considering Kubo's way of changing enemies to allies. :)
I'm glad you liked the game. It was something that struck me as terribly funny - thinking about the two most stoic badasses playing with one another. 2k words later it wasn't quite as funny, but hey, I learned new things.
(Bugger. That's what I get for posting on no sleep. *Changes*)
*Runs off to fix her typos* How you manage to make my mistakes so funny never ceases to amaze me. Guh. *Facepalm* I blame my stupid computer's auto-correct. It clearly thought I wanted the whole thing located in the wrong continent. I've got to start doing a triple-check or something.
You know, you do wonders for a person's self-esteem. 'strictly logical...almost cold, but that's not the right word' is pretty much exactly how I view Ulquiorra's personality. I fidgeted the whole time with how I put these two, trying to keep them in character while not know either very well.
XD Hopefully I can give you even better kisses when I finally finish my Shink pieces.
Mutual stalking, awesome! I'll get those creepy jumbo sunglasses so we can be sneaky about it.
That was my favorite line in the whole piece. I got to use the word 'nonchalantly', and for some reason the fact that it was next to the pears just made me smile when I wrote it.
But of course I will! *Looks devious*
Why are you sorry? Don't be sorry! There is absolutely nothing wrong with you taking a break, and 'little somethings' are perhaps the most awesome of writing forms, because they're pure inspiration!
Well what is yummy, is yummy no denying it and it SO leads on! It's like the smell of delicious food to a starving person before it gets to dig in you know? Oh it cranks up the anticipation~ Love the playful feeling of the two. They are SO cute~ Unbelievably so considering their one-expression personalities and you have managed to pull it off nicely while keeping them in char, totally squeeing about it!
Byakuya + Ulquiorra + Cute = ?!!? WHAT IS THIS MADNESS? Every time someone tells me I managed to stay in character I do a dance, it makes me so very happy.
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I'm glad I didn't ruin the appeal for the pairing, it really is a curiosity for me. :)
(Glad you read, even more that you enjoyed)
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I think a lot of us have the idea that Ulquiorra could switch his allegiance. This is an interesting take at how that might happen, and how things might be for him if he does.
Love the little contest between the two. It's subtle and fun, and speaks a great deal without any words at all.
Edit: Oops, forgot to add, I think you meant "Seireitei" and not "Serengeti"? ;)
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It does seem like something that could happen, considering Kubo's way of changing enemies to allies. :)
I'm glad you liked the game. It was something that struck me as terribly funny - thinking about the two most stoic badasses playing with one another. 2k words later it wasn't quite as funny, but hey, I learned new things.
(Bugger. That's what I get for posting on no sleep. *Changes*)
(Glad you liked it, Akuni)
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*Runs off to fix her typos*
How you manage to make my mistakes so funny never ceases to amaze me.
Guh. *Facepalm* I blame my stupid computer's auto-correct. It clearly thought I wanted the whole thing located in the wrong continent. I've got to start doing a triple-check or something.
You know, you do wonders for a person's self-esteem. 'strictly logical...almost cold, but that's not the right word' is pretty much exactly how I view Ulquiorra's personality. I fidgeted the whole time with how I put these two, trying to keep them in character while not know either very well.
XD Hopefully I can give you even better kisses when I finally finish my Shink pieces.
Mutual stalking, awesome!
I'll get those creepy jumbo sunglasses so we can be sneaky about it.
*Big Bear Hug*
(You're awesome!)
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That was my favorite line in the whole piece. I got to use the word 'nonchalantly', and for some reason the fact that it was next to the pears just made me smile when I wrote it.
But of course I will! *Looks devious*
Why are you sorry? Don't be sorry! There is absolutely nothing wrong with you taking a break, and 'little somethings' are perhaps the most awesome of writing forms, because they're pure inspiration!
*Ninja Tackle!*
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Thanks so much for playing! <3
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I seem doomed to first kiss oneshots. ^^ Oh well, they are fun.
Thank you for dropping in, I was hoping you'd enjoy it.
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Yummy!
:D I'm addicted.
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Cheers,
(Zef)
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(tell me to shut up, tell me to shut up)
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Every time someone tells me I managed to stay in character I do a dance, it makes me so very happy.
(NO! I FIGHT THE POWER!)
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