Your story makes me smile every morning and I'm a little sad it will be coming to a close so soon. Smokey was wonderful in this chapter. So few bots have the bearings to holler at Ratchet while in his med bay but it was needed.
I'm thrilled a antidote was found before the next big battle. Hopefully life can get back to normal now.
By the way, have you thought about posting this story on any of the livejournal transformer communities? I know there are some people who don't like FF.net but who would love this story. Just a thought. :)
Hey there :) Thank you for telling me this story is making you smile - that comment put a big smile on my face too :D
I'm delighted you're enjoying this story. It was fun (if a little emotive) to write, but I never quite know whether that's going to come across on paper, so I love getting feedback.
Smokescreen always strikes me as a mech that commits himself to things - whether it's distraction or gambling. I can't help feeling that he'd show the same commitment to his patients - even if it means facing down Ratchet!
As for communities, I was thinking I might put a link up on prowlxjazz when the last chapter comes out tomorrow. Hopefully the focus is sufficiently prowl/jazzy to fit :)
“Prowl.” It shouldn’t be possible for so deep and loud a voice to also be so gentle. Optimus Prime managed it. This sentence totally made my heart go a flutter. Optimus at his Optimus-ee best <3333
I really liked the way Smokescreen knew exactly how to poke him to get Op to put aside the (completely understandable) guilt trip and move on to how to help Prowl and Jazz, and the descriptions of the subtle signals Prowl and Jazz give when they first come to the medbay that show just how much they're still hurting, easily read now by Ratchet and Optimus.
Wheeljack tackle! XD Oh dear, yeah, good thing Jazz didn't go all Special Ops on him!
Whhheeee!!! Yay! They remember!!! \o/
psst - I noticed a few of your comment replies (like the one right above here) have been for some reason as new comments to your post, rather than a reply to the person, so it won't show up on the person's email comment notifications, just wanted to let ya know ^_^
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I'm thrilled a antidote was found before the next big battle. Hopefully life can get back to normal now.
By the way, have you thought about posting this story on any of the livejournal transformer communities? I know there are some people who don't like FF.net but who would love this story. Just a thought. :)
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I'm delighted you're enjoying this story. It was fun (if a little emotive) to write, but I never quite know whether that's going to come across on paper, so I love getting feedback.
Smokescreen always strikes me as a mech that commits himself to things - whether it's distraction or gambling. I can't help feeling that he'd show the same commitment to his patients - even if it means facing down Ratchet!
As for communities, I was thinking I might put a link up on prowlxjazz when the last chapter comes out tomorrow. Hopefully the focus is sufficiently prowl/jazzy to fit :)
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I really liked the way Smokescreen knew exactly how to poke him to get Op to put aside the (completely understandable) guilt trip and move on to how to help Prowl and Jazz, and the descriptions of the subtle signals Prowl and Jazz give when they first come to the medbay that show just how much they're still hurting, easily read now by Ratchet and Optimus.
Wheeljack tackle! XD Oh dear, yeah, good thing Jazz didn't go all Special Ops on him!
Whhheeee!!! Yay! They remember!!! \o/
psst - I noticed a few of your comment replies (like the one right above here) have been for some reason as new comments to your post, rather than a reply to the person, so it won't show up on the person's email comment notifications, just wanted to let ya know ^_^
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