Watched

[zea_taylor]

I've had a busy, tiring and incredibly bad day so I've been editing a little P/J thing I wrote at the weekend to cheer myself up. I don't honestly think it's good enough to post anywhere else (edit: although I guess it's worth a try), but for what it's worth, this is what happened next after 'People Watching'...

Title: Watched
Verse: G1
Rating: M

Comments

[playswithworms]

Go post this on ProwlXJazz, this instant! *points firmly*

Hee - seriously, this was marvelous! Sweet and funny and tender and touching, with a bit of lovely hotness to top it all off. Getting vigorous, indeed XD And Jazz pouncing at Sideswipe *giggle* and I love that last line ^^

[zea_taylor]

Really? *squints at story* I kind of thought it was overlong and rambling, but couldn't see what to cut out. And I've mangled Jazz's accent. :S

I'm really glad you liked it though. It was sort of fun to write and it just sort of happened. As for posting elsewhere... I'll read it again tonight and see what I think. Thanks, as always, for commenting - it's nice to know you enjoyed it! :)

[playswithworms]

Yay! You posted! This is good stuff, it must needs be shared *nods* :D

[wicked3659]

This was lovely! :3 I'm glad you posted it on PJ. It's a great fic, you should have more faith in your writing, I for one enjoy it! ^_^

[zea_taylor]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. And thanks for the encouragement too - I'm usually more confident about a story than this one, but it's good to know it went down well.

[bluetaelon]

That was wonderful!:D

[zea_taylor]

Thank you! I actually had it half written when you asked whether we'd see the conversation after 'People Watching', I just wasn't sure it was going to work. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[starsheild]

That was very nice. The play between Jazz and Prowl was fun, and a fun read for me after a long day at work.

[zea_taylor]

I'm glad you enjoyed it - and many thanks for taking the time to leave a comment. I appreciate it :)