People Watching

May 12, 2011 09:00

Just a short thing that insisted on writing itself last weekend...

Title: People Watching
Verse: G1
Rating: T
Characters: Ratchet, Sparkplug, Optimus, Ironhide, Jazz, Prowl
Warnings: Implied mech/mech interfacing, and discussion of the same
Words: 2186, complete

Summary: Sometimes what you see on the surface is a long way from giving you the whole ( Read more... )

transformers, ratchet, prowl/jazz, g1, fan fiction

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__wilderness__ May 12 2011, 10:54:12 UTC
This was such a beautiful look at a relationship no one thinks exists.

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zea_taylor May 12 2011, 18:08:46 UTC
Thank you so much - I'm delighted you enjoyed it!

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wicked3659 May 12 2011, 11:33:15 UTC
Nicely done! :)

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zea_taylor May 12 2011, 18:09:13 UTC
Thank you!

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bluebirdsoaring May 12 2011, 13:03:43 UTC
I love Ratchet's POV on this relationship =) Those mechs think they are being so sneaky...not!! What a great story!!

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zea_taylor May 12 2011, 18:10:17 UTC
To be fair, they'd probably get away with sneaking without a medic around :) Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you liked it.

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starsheild May 12 2011, 14:07:37 UTC
Very nice. The relationships from Ratchets perspective was interesting, and the interaction between Prowl and Jazz was amusing.

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zea_taylor May 12 2011, 18:11:54 UTC
Thank you for your comment - I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to take a look at the pair of them from outside.

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swordage May 12 2011, 15:01:18 UTC
Awwwww! This left me with such a huge grin. The giant alien robots are more subtle than you give them credit for, Sparkplug!

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zea_taylor May 12 2011, 18:13:41 UTC
A grin was what I aimed at, so I'm glad it worked :) Thanks for the review - and yep, Sparkplug needs to refine his mech observation skills!

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