Never Give Up - Part 12 of 12

May 05, 2013 17:28



Title: Never Give Up
'verse: G1
Rating: T/PG-13
Length: 50k, 12 chapters
Characters: Jazz, Prowl, ensemble
Warnings: angst, cybertronian profanity, mild Prowl/Jazz, violence
Thank you all for reading so far, and for coming with me on this ride. It's almost a shock to get to the end. And special thanks to all those who have reviewed! I hope you've ( Read more... )

transformers, never give up, angst, prowl/jazz, g1, fan fiction

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playswithworms May 6 2013, 01:15:09 UTC
Aw, last chapter *has a sad* This has been such a perfectly satisfying story! I'm gonna miss having a new chapter every day ^^

Of all situations for a traumatized, just-woke-up Jazz, trapped by the love and concern and freaking out/rejoicing of all of his friends! Of course he wants to be there, but poor guy just really needs a break to figure out which way is up again (and Prowl, too!) And Bluestreak, oh golly, somebody sit on him, and then hug him XD And despite the fact that he's really still cracking apart at the seams, Jazz handles it all brilliantly - thank goodness for Ratchet, though <3

Prowl's little bits of humor are a delight, and learning to take a bit of down time, well how 'bout that? And Prime noting how much their relationship really...hasn't changed all that much, actually - if they hadn't fit together so well already, Prowl wouldn't have been able to save Jazz in the first place.

Loved Prime and Jazz's little talk - both of them facing the hard truths with honesty, caring so deeply <3

Prowl, dull! Perish the thought, and Jazz does just that, with humor and style ^_^

All my happy buttons, they have been pushed, just perfect! <333333333333333333333333333333

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zea_taylor May 6 2013, 13:58:20 UTC
Thank you! I am so, so happy that you've enjoyed this. I'm always uneasy about my ability to end stories - so I'm breathing a sigh of relief and grinning at the same time thanks to your lovely comment. Poor Jazz has some healing to do, but he's not a mech to hide from reality, and he knows how to compartmentalise and face his friends.

I quite agree about Blue, by the way! I'd swear the mech wrote those words himself :)

But then Jazz had to face the truth - both of his Prime's fears and his new situation with Prowl. Fortunately he has the aplomb to deal with both - and the prospect of a brighter future ahead of them all.

Thanks again for commenting - it really puts a smile on my face... until next time :)

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