Fic: Just Casual MU Remix

Mar 11, 2011 23:26

Title: Just Casual MU Remix
MU Remix of: the start of Just Casual by weepingnaiad and abigail89
Fandom & Pairing: Star Trek AOS, Kirk/McCoy
Rating: R
Warnings: mild D/s
Word Count: Around 3600
Summary: Jim and Leonard have been invited to a small New Year’s party by Philip Boyce.

A birthday fic for weepingnaiad. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!

Just Casual MU Remix )

r, mu, kirk/mccoy

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yeomanrand March 11 2011, 22:51:08 UTC
Er. Wow.

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zauzat March 13 2011, 07:35:08 UTC
Thanks! :)

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weepingnaiad March 11 2011, 23:07:15 UTC
For me?!?!

*dances*

HOMG! I love the little changes, the 'us against the world' vibe going on and their little reassurances to each other. The way they move together, Jim lightly brushes his fingers against Bones'.

And then you dressed Jim up in my very favorite outfit. UNF. Oh, to be Caitlin or One or Victoria! mmmmm.... so pretty. And then you added the cherry on top: Leonard given to Pike and Boyce. That is pretty world exploding hotness!

I'm sorry the muses fled, but I will keep my fingers crossed that they return, even if you 'fade to black' on the details, I would so love to see the aftermath of this.

Delicious and gorgeous!

Thank you, bb!

*hugs*
WN

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zauzat March 13 2011, 07:39:06 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. Fade to black might help produce the ending actually. I've realized I'm not good at writing multi-person porn. Jim with the women was the image that made me want to remix it!

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imachar March 12 2011, 04:29:30 UTC
Oh boy, you have such a deft touch with MU - all hot and twisted and sinister and then unexpectedly sweet.

Only in privacy and darkness and silence did they communicate - without voices - with hands and lips and never acknowledged gentleness. Just gorgeous....

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zauzat March 13 2011, 07:41:43 UTC
Thanks! I don't think I managed to do justice to the idea in my head but I did like bits of it.

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burnettefan March 12 2011, 23:38:52 UTC
zauzat, thanks for throwing Pike in there, you know I love him!

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zauzat March 13 2011, 07:34:18 UTC
:) I very seldom leave Pike out! I love his character.

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savoytruffle March 13 2011, 14:57:15 UTC
This is one hot scenario. And I love all the little bits of information we get about this universe and the boys place within it.

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zauzat March 13 2011, 17:39:23 UTC
Thanks! :)

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