Fic: No Parachutes (H50 - Danny/Steve)

[zarah5]

I didn’t actually plan for this to become one of those “five times” fics, but that’s how it wanted to turn out.

H50, Danny/Steve
PG-13, ~3'000 words
Summary: Five times Danny chickened out (and one time he didn't)

Comments

[pattyfeidt]

Very cool. Love how slow on the up take Danny is and contrary to what Danny thinks, how patient Steve is. Takes lots of patience to get around mindfields =)

[zarah5]

It does! And I'm very sure Steve can be patient; he just rarely considers it worth the effort. Danny being very much worth it, of course. *g*

Thank you!

[sheafrotherdon]

Oh, this is adorable. I love Danny's slow realization, and how defeated he seems by the fact that he's fallen for Steve - right up until he realizes Steve loves him back. Love it - and love the tangled fingers at the end.

[zarah5]

Thank you! Also:
>> how defeated he seems by the fact that he's fallen for Steve <<
Defeated, yes! That's such a perfect description. Until Danny learns that it's not the end of his world, hee.

[vamysteryfan]

This was really nice - Steve slowly reeling Danno in

[zarah5]

Contrary to popular belief, Steve can be patient. *g*

[klutzy_girl]

Aww, cute! I loved this.

[zarah5]

Thank you!

[zarah5]

My brain wants me to write five things at once, and, ugh. Actually, it's kind of annoying because half of those five things? Would be epics, and I do not want to write another epic right now. I don't. Seriously, I just--no.

Uh. Sorry, venting over. Now: Thank you so, so much, honey! Just, yes. Thank you. &hearts

[zarah5]

Well, to be honest, I just kicked what was shaping up to be an epic college AU to the curb, after writing 5000 words. I just... lost interest. Which is sometimes the problem with stories this long.

But! I am absolutely planning to write Surfer!Steve AU! Because, hee, that should be fun.

&hearts