So I had about a dozen things to do this afternoon, and rather than do any of them I sat and read this - AND I AM NOT SORRY!!! It was perfect MTB fic!! I loved every smutty word of it. Your gang characters were brilliant, from creepy Heyerdahl and Pelligrino as the bad guys to Mark Sheppard and Squinty as the not so bad guys! And my absolute favourite - Ruthie, she was awesome!!
I loved the whole story, Jensen's troubled youth and addiction and Jared's awful childhood, and poor JDM's sticky end *sob* and I adored Jensen's kick-ass manipulative scheming attitude. Jared and him were (as usual) a match made in heaven! Oh, and all the kinky sex was every kind of hot!!! Cock-cages and panties - yes please!!!!!
So, just so we're clear - I freaking loved everything about this! Your writing as usual rocks!!! <3 <3
Haha! So happy to have been a procrastination enabler! :D
I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this so much. I had a lot of fun with this story. The Js were great to write: I was determined they were both gonna be kickass and I'm so happy that you adored scheming, manipulative Jensen! And Ruthie was so much fun to write! So glad she was a favourite. I loved her a lot too!! Plus I got to have fun with kinky sex! I would've loved a picture of Jensen in his red, lacy panties, but by the time I got that part of the story to Amber she was at jibcon and it just wasn't possible!
Glad you got a kick out of this! Thank you so much for your lovely comment. :)
Thank you! So glad you enjoyed. Especially that you liked Jared's characterisation: the giant puppy he could've been and the darkness that was caused by his life!
So darkly wonderful! I loved how you captured and portrayed this dark and thrilling world, and your cast of characters were perfect!
I adored the story; from J2's backgrounds, to the mystery of JDM's murder, the hierarchy of the all the members, and the characterizations were spot on (I loved Jared's fierce puppy, Jensen's sharp wit, Ruthie's intelligence!) Such a thrilling read with an ending that left me wanting more.
Thank you so much! I'm so happy that you felt I'd captured the MC world! I had a lot of fun writing this story so I'm delighted you had fun reading it too. I really liked these characters and would happily play in their world again! (whispers...I'm actually working on a timestamp at the moment...)
SCREEEEEEEEECHES!!!! I THINK YOU KILLED ME! I can't even tell you HOW MUCH I enjoyed this!! So, SO, SOOOOOOO MUCH! SOOOOOO MUCH! This is going to go right into my favorite fic folder!!
Loved, loved, loved the bad guys. Heyerdahl and Pellegrino and Fuller *shudders* I LOVED THE WOMEN SO FREAKING MUCH! Ruth especially and jealous Alaina and all the others, taking Jensen in!!
Loved Jared and Jensen, both troubled, both vulnerable, both BAMF, BOTH SO SEXY! Loved, loved, loved Jared turning up all in leather to come to Jensen's rescue! Fuck, that image was such a turn-on. Loved their dynamic, how they fit, how Jensen loved to have Jared take control! THE SEX!!! Dude, seriously! Panties? Cock-cage? Prostate stimulator? Bondage? Edging? I groaned half-way through this fic, like SHE WANTS TO KILL ME, THAT'S IT, SHE WANTS TO SEE ME ON THE FLOOR! lolol
Anyway, the darkness, the filth, the romance, the ENDING with all of them together! Yes, yes, so much yes for this story. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING IT :D
This comment made me want to light a cigarette and lean back with a contented sigh!!! Was it good for you too? Why, yes. I think it was!!
Seriously, thank you so much. You touched on pretty much everything I enjoyed writing in the story. I wanted asshole villains and badass women and vulnerable yet bamf boys. And I especially wanted a Jensen who loved Jared to take control, but was still completely kickass in his own right. So happy you enjoyed those aspects.
And I'm pretty sure our taste in kink lines up rather nicely (your pinboard is such a nice place for me to browse!!) so I guess the kinks worked for you too!! :D
Thank you for reading and for leaving such a lovely comment. :D
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I loved the whole story, Jensen's troubled youth and addiction and Jared's awful childhood, and poor JDM's sticky end *sob* and I adored Jensen's kick-ass manipulative scheming attitude. Jared and him were (as usual) a match made in heaven! Oh, and all the kinky sex was every kind of hot!!! Cock-cages and panties - yes please!!!!!
So, just so we're clear - I freaking loved everything about this! Your writing as usual rocks!!! <3 <3
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I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this so much. I had a lot of fun with this story. The Js were great to write: I was determined they were both gonna be kickass and I'm so happy that you adored scheming, manipulative Jensen! And Ruthie was so much fun to write! So glad she was a favourite. I loved her a lot too!!
Plus I got to have fun with kinky sex! I would've loved a picture of Jensen in his red, lacy panties, but by the time I got that part of the story to Amber she was at jibcon and it just wasn't possible!
Glad you got a kick out of this! Thank you so much for your lovely comment. :)
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Thank you so much for sharing with us!
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Thanks so much for taking the time to comment! :)
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I adored the story; from J2's backgrounds, to the mystery of JDM's murder, the hierarchy of the all the members, and the characterizations were spot on (I loved Jared's fierce puppy, Jensen's sharp wit, Ruthie's intelligence!) Such a thrilling read with an ending that left me wanting more.
Thank you so much for writing and for sharing :)
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(whispers...I'm actually working on a timestamp at the moment...)
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Loved, loved, loved the bad guys. Heyerdahl and Pellegrino and Fuller *shudders* I LOVED THE WOMEN SO FREAKING MUCH! Ruth especially and jealous Alaina and all the others, taking Jensen in!!
Loved Jared and Jensen, both troubled, both vulnerable, both BAMF, BOTH SO SEXY! Loved, loved, loved Jared turning up all in leather to come to Jensen's rescue! Fuck, that image was such a turn-on. Loved their dynamic, how they fit, how Jensen loved to have Jared take control! THE SEX!!! Dude, seriously! Panties? Cock-cage? Prostate stimulator? Bondage? Edging? I groaned half-way through this fic, like SHE WANTS TO KILL ME, THAT'S IT, SHE WANTS TO SEE ME ON THE FLOOR! lolol
Anyway, the darkness, the filth, the romance, the ENDING with all of them together! Yes, yes, so much yes for this story. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING IT :D
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This comment made me want to light a cigarette and lean back with a contented sigh!!! Was it good for you too? Why, yes. I think it was!!
Seriously, thank you so much. You touched on pretty much everything I enjoyed writing in the story. I wanted asshole villains and badass women and vulnerable yet bamf boys. And I especially wanted a Jensen who loved Jared to take control, but was still completely kickass in his own right. So happy you enjoyed those aspects.
And I'm pretty sure our taste in kink lines up rather nicely (your pinboard is such a nice place for me to browse!!) so I guess the kinks worked for you too!! :D
Thank you for reading and for leaving such a lovely comment. :D
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