Fic - Ruby Red

[zara_zee]

Title: Ruby Red

Words: 1,884 aprox.

Genre(s): Action/Drama

Rating: M

Type: Supernatural

Disclaimer: Not mine. They belong to Kripke….I’m just playing…for fun

Spoilers: Season 4, up to 4.22. Also for 5.3.

Warnings: language, sexual references, adult themes, violence
Summary: Set 4.1.(Starts with episode dialogue.) How did Ruby feel when Dean

Comments

[smash86]

Well you know this is the first Ruby pov fic that I've EVER read...lol...so I was kinda squinting to start with but you nailed it beautifully!!!

I love the way you keep her evil and manipulative because she was all of that...and I don't really want to feel sorry for her at all cause she broke our poor Sammy and turned him against Dean and for that she HAD to die...*smirks*...so you scored BIG bonus points with me for keeping the bitch...well...a bitch!!

You wrote the RubyVoice so well and my favourite line...“I’m gonna be awesome,”...was perfect!!

*hugz*...and YAY your first lj fic post!!...WOOHOO!!!

[zara_zee]

Thanks! Appreciate you taking the time, even if you had to squint at first! Now I just need to learn how to post behind a cut!!

Yeah, she was a manipulative bitch and that's what I wanted to capture because for most of S4 she was presented in a (relatively) positive light, and I wanted to expose her evil off-camera plotting and bitchiness!!

I bet the fangirl cheer when Sam held Ruby's arms and Dean stabbed her was audible around the globe!!

[smash86]

lol...yeah I certainly did the fangirl cheer for Ruby being dead AND for Dean and Sammy agreeing on something for the first time in a long time!!

Oh and if you want to know about lj cuts, click on "Help" (normally top right of page on your Home Page or Inbox next to Account) and then look at the first FAQ on the right side of the page. Or use this link:

http://www.livejournal.com/support/faqbrowse.bml?faqid=75

Hope this helps!

cheers
smash

[zara_zee]

There's an online help? [smacks head against desk] of course there's an online help! D'uh. Somehow managed to miss that!

Thanks that helps a lot!!

(like your icon!!) :)

[tifaching]

That is one of the best things I've ever read. I've never seen Ruby POV from the time Dean showed up at her door and that and everything that followed was perfectly in character and perfectly plausible. She got her nasty hooks into Sam but good and never let him go. She played him like a fiddle and messed him up enough that he followed her right to the bitter end.

You, like Ruby, (but in a good way) are awesome!

[zara_zee]

Oh wow! What an amazing compliment! Especially given the depth of amazing-ness in this fandom and coming from such a brilliant writer as yourself!

I did kind of secretly admire how brilliantly Ruby manipulated Sam and couldn't help wondering what she *really* thought when she saw Dean on her doorstep! Thank you so much for reading and leaving me such a lovely, awesome comment... :)

liked!

[tattoosgirl29]

this was really good I liked the fact that you had evil ruby i never saw her as nice in any way and its nice seeing that.

Re: liked!

[zara_zee]

So glad you enjoyed the story! When I re-watched S4, with hindsight, I just got to wondering what must've been going through Ruby's mind when Dean turned up alive and not in hell. Thanks for taking the time to comment! :)

Re: liked!

[tattoosgirl29]

You write them Ill read them. I used to write fan fic all the time but work has gotten in the way so now all i do is read them.