Fic: Catastrophic System Failure (10.21 episode coda)

May 11, 2015 17:49

Denial. It's not just a river in Egypt. Nor is it the exclusive domain of the Winchester brothers. Since the last episode, it is also my preferred place to hang out.[Spoiler (click to open)]I love Charlie. I know she's not everyone's cup of tea, but I thoroughly enjoyed her character and would've been happy to see a lot more of her.


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s10, charlie bradbury, pg-13, spoilers, dean winchester, sam winchester

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fanspired May 11 2015, 09:12:35 UTC
SPN writers need to read this.

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zara_zee May 11 2015, 10:27:42 UTC
Thank you! I'd probably stop breathing if I thought anyone even remotely connected with the show had read my stories, but thank you! :) I would love for them to go a similar route.

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freya922 May 11 2015, 09:38:40 UTC
That was so well done - freakin' excellent! You drew on everything we ever knew about Charlie and I also loved that you juxtaposed that with Rowena"s declarations. The "math" and "magic" notion was inspired. I wish Robbie Thompson could read this to alleviate his own sorrow...

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zara_zee May 11 2015, 10:38:04 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad the 'math' and 'magic' thing made sense and that the structure worked. I was so sad writing it that my thoughts were completely disjointed! As I just said in another comment, I'd probably stop breathing if I thought anyone even remotely connected with the show had read one of my stories, but I did see that Robbie had fought hard for Charlie, so maybe he has his own version and maybe he'll get to pitch it one day. :D

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tifaching May 11 2015, 10:11:16 UTC
Oh, Charlie.... I love the way you worked this, with each bit connected to Rowena's lines. I especially liked the call back to Dick Roman saying she'd be impossible to copy.

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zara_zee May 11 2015, 10:39:47 UTC
Thank you! So glad the structure worked. I was a bit all over the place when I was writing it!

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madebyme_x May 11 2015, 10:11:21 UTC
Wow, just wow! I loved this so hard.

I loved how you expanded on her character, fleshing her out a little more, giving us all the details that we never got to see. And I also liked how you used Rowena's words within the fic - very effective.

I too wanted more Charlie, and am gutted that she's gone, and this might just be my head-cannon too. Thank you for sharing :)

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zara_zee May 11 2015, 10:44:02 UTC
Thank you! You're very welcome. Charlie was such an interesting character. I enjoyed her so much and I'm so sad that she's gone. I'm glad the structure worked. I was so all-over-the-place emotionally when I was writing it, so I'm glad it was coherent enough!

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borgmama1of5 May 11 2015, 11:07:46 UTC
Oh, this works fantastically! I wish this would happen!!!

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zara_zee May 11 2015, 11:41:43 UTC
Thank you! I'm holding out hope. That file transfer was awfully big!

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