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zankou164

BBM PICTURE PERFECT chapter 5

Mar 27, 2008 14:58

BBM Picture Perfect - Chapter 5

Ennis stood at the foot of the bed, smiling broadly at Jack. He fumbled with the button on Jack's jeans and opened it. He then gently pulled the jeans from the bottom, causing them to slide down over Jack, slowly caressing him, causing Jack to laugh. Jack's erection was visible through his underwear, and he was ( Read more... )

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brokeback1963 March 27 2008, 15:58:13 UTC

Awww, baby, I love this chapter. How sweet and funny these boy are.

I was smiling the whole time!!!

Thank you so much Matt!!!

zankou164 March 27 2008, 16:17:21 UTC

no problem im very glad you liked it :)

torry28 March 27 2008, 17:53:43 UTC

It was a lovely chapter, nothing rushed, sweet loving with a few funny comments thrown in makes me believe Ennis and Jack are real and not just characters in a story. A girl can dream.
Thank you.
Torry

thanks :) zankou164 March 27 2008, 18:01:54 UTC

people keep leaving me wonderful complements and thwn thanking me :) i should be thanking you for saying nice things :)

bbmbeliever March 28 2008, 02:56:06 UTC

I love your sweet and playful boys!

tizi17 March 28 2008, 07:18:20 UTC

isn't that the way we all wish to have our experiences and encounters, first or always? sweet...

poppyhoney_67 March 28 2008, 08:24:03 UTC

I agree with everyone, this was a lovely chapter Matt. Funny and sweet and romantic. You're doing a great job. :)

thanks zankou164 March 28 2008, 11:40:46 UTC

thanks for the support everyone :)