another poem by me

[zander_hhh]

look more updates! here is another written work by well me. Its a tad long because of its format but read on

Comments

[best_intentions]

The breaking of the meter and format at the end really solidified the effect made in the last stanza - awesome poem.

[zander_hhh]

thanks man much appreacted

Response

[jactiff]

Wow! Your poem gave me shivers or it may be the coldness of the room. lol. Great poem!