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Jan 27, 2006 13:31

This is what I've done so far for the ( Liturgy 1 )

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dorinne January 27 2006, 20:08:20 UTC
OK, I admit that about three sentences in I decided to just skim the rest. I did read the whole part where I saw Ocean's Tide mentioned, though, and that part is great. :)

I'm sure the rest is, too...it's just too late to read that much...

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romandruid January 28 2006, 19:30:17 UTC
Good work! Just one thing you wanna look at again -- I think the question on roles has to do specifically in the context of ritual. You might want to narrow your focus on that one a bit.

The only other possible suggestion I would have (if you want to do even more, that is...) is to do a bit of compare/contrast with how different people/groves in ADF take different approaches in ritual. Not necessary, by any means, but I actually enjoyed doing a TON of research on outdwellers. (Need to finish that article someday...). You're the kind of person who might enjoy that sort of extended research, too. ;)

Way to go! *applause*

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zalon_draconis January 28 2006, 20:11:25 UTC
I was wondering about that for the roles part. So, I guess I can get fixing that now.

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