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Marital Consideration - Chapter 2

Oct 22, 2009 21:40

Title: Marital Consideration
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Rating: R-NC17
Pairings Hughes/Roy/Gracia, Roy/Gracia, Hughes/Roy, Hughes/Gracia
Type: Het, Yaoi, light humor
Warnings: Smut, language
Summary: Maes and Gracia decide they'd like to add a new element to their sex life-Roy Mustang.

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Comments 23

cheru_chan October 23 2009, 06:11:19 UTC

*two thumbs way up!*

zakai_ October 25 2009, 17:22:13 UTC

W00t! :D

too cool for school anna_s_cat October 23 2009, 10:52:32 UTC

oh my, that's you know... just great. i hope you are going to continue quickly, i never read something like that before. and gracia is just the best. take care!

Re: too cool for school zakai_ October 25 2009, 17:23:03 UTC

I'm glad you're enjoying :)

Also, I like your icon. ^^

anna_s_cat October 29 2009, 17:33:30 UTC

hey, thanks!
so, hope fast next up about your cool story. i read about making riza into story.... but i don't know. we have tons of riza everywhere. i don't want riza into this story, i think. but, decision is of course yours.

zakai_ October 29 2009, 22:06:01 UTC

Don't worry. Even if I decide to add Riza at some point, Gracia will still be the leading lady for this story ^_~

annepackrat October 23 2009, 16:08:25 UTC

Lol. Naughty!Gracia is fun. Needs more Naughty!Riza though. Maybe for a sequel.

eve_n_furter October 23 2009, 19:22:14 UTC

I second this. Nice to see Gracia show a bit of teeth ;E
Somewhat reluctant Roy with devious Maes is also an interesting idea...

zakai_ October 25 2009, 17:24:24 UTC

Yes, naughty!Gracia is fun :D As for Riza, well, I've thought about a few things for her, but I haven't made up my mind yet. I could add her in pretty easily without compromising the main plot idea I have for this fic, sooooo we'll see ^_~

annepackrat October 25 2009, 20:24:44 UTC

What can I say, CoM, M Jules and the others have converted me into an OT4 fan. Lol.

snarry_fan7 October 24 2009, 04:55:26 UTC

Gracia is awesome in this; she gave me the impression of being a bit of a yaoi fangirl when she smiled at the thought of Maes and Roy being together, lol. A most excellent chapter.~Sophia

zakai_ October 25 2009, 17:25:43 UTC

I like to think that Gracia is secretly extremely kinky XD I think she'd love to see her husband get it on with another guy too.

snarry_fan7 October 25 2009, 18:15:04 UTC

Definitely. I know I would (if I were married or attached to anyone, lol).~Sophia

minidrag33 October 24 2009, 23:22:04 UTC

\o/ Excellent chapter. I really like this story. I like seeing Roy's thought process. I love Gracia's answer. :D

zakai_ October 25 2009, 17:26:30 UTC

Thanks :D Gracia is a lot of fun, and it's also fun to write Roy as being a little less dominate than I usually do for him XD