Whisper

[zagury]

Title: Whisper
Author/Penname: zagury
Artists: always_jbj & dianaweasley
Pairing/Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley, Ginny Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy
Summary: When Volemort takes the meaning of ‘new world order’ into an entirely different aspect, Hermione is immediately part of the transition. She spends years locked away before Ron can even begin to find a way to know her

Comments

Part 1

[prunesquallormd]

(Posted on your journal and the Big Bang site too, as I'm not sure where you'd prefer it to go

Re: Part 1

[zagury]

(It didn't really even matter ♥)

You can always take all the time you need, you should know that :)

I never really thought of all that in that perspective, but I can't believe someone would say something like that. Harry, Ron and Hermione are only sticking through with each other until the end because they love each other and they've just been there for everything. Without that, Harry would have probably died in the first book

[prunesquallormd]

And Hermione

[zagury]

Oh, I'm so relieved that you liked that segment there, because I was so worried about it. I love to use repetition (you probably know that already, though) but sometimes I tend to kill it (slaughter would be the correct term) so I didn't know how that would work for some of the readers.

Hm, really? I'm going to go back and look for that now :)

No, this was the most perfect perfect perfect response. I couldn't thank you more ♥

[lash_larue]

I got seriously started reading this last night, and I admit that I did so just because it is yours and you seemed excited about it. R/H is not a pairing I like.

But...

I just got to the place where Ginny and Ron are at George's, and I may skip out early from work so I can get back to it. It's fascinating, I love how you have Ginny going with him and Harry being all "best of luck mate, but I have to TCB"

Not to mention what Hermione is up to, the insurrectionist minx.
L

[zagury]

You read this just for me? ♥♥♥

I think, looking back on it in my head, Hermione's perspective is more about her and Ron's perspective is more about finding her, so I hope it's not too unbearable for you. (and you know I wouldn't write this big of a piece without some significant Ginny in there :))

Thanks, Lash. I don't know if you know how much this means to me. ♥

[lash_larue]

Someone has a header on their page "Read the fic not the pairing" or something like that. Words to live by.

I like your writing, and I like this story. Not everything can be femmeslash, nor needs to be. Baby kitty has been ill, so I'm behind, but you'll hear from me before too long.
L

[zagury]

I hope your baby kitty is getting better!

[lash_larue]

I left a little thing on the site, but here I wanted to tell you that what I liked most about this was the sense I got from it of how much of yourself went into it. How much you felt what the characters were feeling.

Such a long piece is always a challenge. You have to keep filling in the gaps as you go so that a coherent picture emerges in the end, and you did that very well here.

I put this on my Kindle to read, and it's going to stay there.

And no, it was far from unbearable. Hell, even I was pulling for them at the end. ;)
L

[zagury]

I really actually love you for saying that.
I put a ridiculous amount of myself into Hermione--into Ginny and Ron as well, but overall, it was Hermione--because I knew that was the only way to go about things, and I'm glad the result was, well, this.

Your Kindle to read?

Oh goodness, what have I done to you? ;)

♥♥♥