Fic - White Collar - The Overnight Guest

[zoicite]

Fandom: White Collar
Pairing(s): Peter/Neal (and Peter/Elizabeth, though she doesn't actually appear)
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~2,400
Summary: A short scene that takes place mid 1x11 - Taking Neal up on his offer of a place to stay isn’t turning out exactly as Peter expected.

Comments

<G> from ear to ear

[ursula4x]

So that was why Peter was so obnoxious!

Re: <G> from ear to ear

[zoicite]

Hee! Clearly. It is by far the most logical explanation. ;) Thanks for reading!

[mlyn]

Just adorable. That couch did look excruciating, and you described its effect perfectly.

[zoicite]

That couch looks so uncomfortable and not built for sleeping. Thanks so much! Glad you liked the story :D

[china_shop]

Oh, this is fabulous and a wonderful fixit for some of the episode's inconsistencies! *loves and loves*

[zoicite]

aw, thank you so much! I mean, clearly Peter just couldn't handle sharing so much space with Neal. It's the only explanation. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed the story and thank you thank you thank you for the rec as well! :D

[daria234]

This is so great- and Peter's voice is perfect, as are El's and Peter's ridiculously open wonderful communication. Love it :)

[zoicite]

aw, yay! I'm so glad you liked it! I heart this show so much. Thank you for the lovely feedback :D

[bientot]

Thank you thank you thank you thank you!

I was really concerned about Peter's behavior, but this makes it feel MUCH better.

<3

[zoicite]

hee! Obviously Peter just couldn't handle sharing so much space with Neal while his wife was out of town. I mean, come on. ;) Thanks so much for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed the story!