This was fantastic! I am so glad that you posted this. It's beautifully written, and I love hearing more depth to the female characters. I'd love to read more of this!
ohhh, this was beautiful. i love the way you write the dynamic of the tribe, the interactions between various pairings and groupings of them, and the longing that each of them feels for something/someone. other than that random moment in "going down" where jeannie's like, poking crissy with an imaginary dildo or something, i never really thought of the two of them as a pairing, but you completely convinced me with this story!
I totally forgot about that bit during "going down". Pretty much, this entire fic was written because there was one day when I saw the show that Crissy came off as completely in love with Jeannie (and just a little bit jealous of Claude) during the scene following "Air".
Thank you for the feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
Tribe cameos make the world a better place. See, even if no one actually goes and writes fic specifically about them, at least they're not totally excluded!
So I've pretty much been desperately searching Hair fic for awhile ad I found this and I'm so, so glad I did <3 I love the dynamics, the dialogue, the way that everything just falls together to hurt and be funny, occasionally at the same time. I feel for ever single character in this story, just like I did while watching the musical. Great job!
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Thank you for the feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
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Ah, beautiful. Tribe cameos especially make me happy beyond belief. And characterization and awww, all of it.
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Glad you liked it!
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Just brilliant stuff! x
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