Sephy: Champagne Sadness ~ Chapter 1

[yzaquirre]

Title: Sephy: Champagne Sadness
Pairings: ianthony
Rating/Warnings: pg, kind of aghasty.
Genre: Fantasy-like.
Summary: Ian has been struggling to control the demon inside him that has now awaken fully inside him.
Author's Notes: The name of this fic has nothing to do with it, its completely random XD

Comments

[yzaquirre]

Thank youu! <3 At least one person likes it! :)
Yeah, I want to, but i'm afraid everyone will think I'm annoying and stupid. D: You all are so close and I'm just the random outsider. ._.

[swag_queen]

Damn gurl! You didnt tell me u could right so good! I told u readin all tose books liek twilight would make u a writing genus!

[yzaquirre]

LOL no! I probably could have written this much better but I was too lazy too. but it's good enough the way it is XD But thanks Mallie! :)

[swag_queen]

If tis is you when your not tryin Id luv to see your real good stuff!

Did u do the homwork due tomorow for english? I was goin txt you about it but I lost my phone again. I need yur help!

Stop callin me that! You know I prefer Mel.

[yzaquirre]

Hehe, i'll never stop calling you that! It's too adorable!
Great, is that why you weren't responding earlier?! You lose things way too easily.
Of course I did it, unlike you. XD Which questions do you need "help" with?

[firetruckyouxx]

That was very good! Very original by the way, I give you props on the plot. As for feedback, your diction was a bit odd, some of the sentences were worded oddly. Also, a semicolon can only be used when each side of the semicolon can stand alone as a complete sentence. Otherwise, great job ^^

[yzaquirre]

Opps, was logged into my friends account by mistake. XD I'll try to recreate my comment..

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the plot, I was hoping it wouldn't be too cheesy. Yeah, guess I could have edited it a little more before I posted it. Even now as I reread it, I see lots of retarded mistakes that make me cringe so much.. "Anthony just stand there".. 0_0 *headbangs*

[extremesmosh]

New person, yay! :D
And I like this, very original and there will be more parts so all I can say is- yay!
And people won't find you annoying like you said to Ariel. :)

[yzaquirre]

Sorry, I was logged into her account for this comment also. *headbangs*

New comment, yay! :D
Um.. i can't remember what I said, but I think I said it was originally a vampire fic and then I had converted it to this random thing. XD Anyway, thank youu, and I sure hope so.

[juulchii]

I frickin liked it! Please write more!!

[yzaquirre]

Thank youu! :) The next chapter should be out sometime next week.