[WP] Day 2 - Are Things Starting To Turn Funny Already?
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"Things had gone from weird to seriously fishy in less time than she would have needed to hack her way into a porn site server."
I can't believe I've just written that. The fact that the character is a hacker isn't an excuse. And there's an adverb. I know.
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I've just realized that Heiji is developing a certain... I wouldn't say sense of humor, but something vaguely similar. Sarcastic. Yes, I guess it's the word. Miki is less whiny than I had planned her to be, too. I think I like the way they're turning out all by themselves.