Starting Point 4/4 (for maplarojcan)

Jun 23, 2014 17:32

Title: Starting Point 4/4
Rating:PG-13
Genre: Romance, Slice of Life
Word count: 14, 498
Recipient: maplarojcan
Summary: Love starts in many ways. Some more unconventional than others, but each eventually taking their own course.
Author’s Note: Seasons are assigned according to how Japanese dramas are classified (from my knowledge). So Winter = January-March ( Read more... )

exchange: summer exchange 2014, year: 2014

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obsessed_makpa June 24 2014, 05:36:29 UTC
let me present to you the comments I made while reading this fic:
1.YOUR CHINEN & CHINEN-YUTO DYNAMIC IS SO FUN TO READ. :D HIKARU & INOO ARE SUCH PARENTS HERE LBR.
2.“Yamada-kun liked the piece you wrote very much. He didn’t know when you’ll show up to watch a poetry slam so he’s been performing your poem everywhere he goes,” Inoo said. I HAD TO PAUSE HERE BECAUSE AAAAAAAAA
3.THEY MOVED IN TOGETHER WTF AAAAAAAAAAAAAA
4.“Just. Wow. Congratulations,” he said sincerely, once he got over the initial shock. “Who’s the lucky girl that you love more than yourself?” HAH
5. ALL OF 2015 ♥♥♥♥
6. How can one really express emotions that refuse the very names we try to imprison them in? !!!!!!!!!!!!!! this line also Here I sit in the shoulder of the wrong road on the right way to you OH GOOOOD ♥

idk how to sum it up like wow that was a journey and i like the poems inserted through the fic and the storytelling balanced out by the other characters. it has an 'about time' feel to it where the love story is there but not shoved in your face. BUT THANK GOD THEY GOT BACK TOGETHER IN THE END.

this is a long comment but hey this is a long fic so i'm excused :)

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