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Skinny Love

Apr 25, 2010 15:29

Title: Skinny Love
Characters: Kuro/Fai, Tomoyo, mention of Souma
Anonymous AU (could be Horitsuba, could not be)
Warnings: no spoilers, character death
Rating / Genre: G+ / Angst

( Fai’s arms wrapped around Kurogane’s waist from behind. He had lost so much weight recently that he may as well have not been there at all. )

l:oneshot, c:fai, p:kurofai, u:au, s:tsubasa, c:kurogane, fanfic

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d_^ , ^_b kittendisaster May 17 2010, 15:55:56 UTC

You did a fantastic job with this fanfiction. ^^;; I joined just to tell you that, by the way.

Re: d_^ , ^_b yuui_nyanko May 17 2010, 17:11:07 UTC

Thank you very much, I absolutely love to get any feedback you can offer and I really appreciate the effort you went to ^___^ and welcome to LJ! I hpoe you have fun here~

Re: d_^ , ^_b kittendisaster May 18 2010, 01:29:00 UTC

Well, I'm thinking about adding some of my own Kuro/Fai fics up (aren't they technically Kuro/Yuui fics? xD), but I'm a little nervous about it. Almost everyone has such good ones....

Re: d_^ , ^_b yuui_nyanko May 18 2010, 18:28:21 UTC

I suppose they are Kuro/Yuui fics xP I think people tend to carry on referring to the Fai we know as 'Fai' and only call him 'Yuui' or the other way around when both twins are involved...

I understand your nervousness;;; When I first joined LJ I was too scared to post my stuff to comms and such because I didn't think anybody would want to see them, but everyone in the KF comms are so nice and helpful, and there are lots of readers that will give really in-depth critiques if you ask for them. The way I thought of it was; If I never take the chance, I'll never have the opportunity to improve. All of us here are still learning and improving, and that's through the feedback of others :3

Re: d_^ , ^_b kittendisaster May 20 2010, 01:40:57 UTC

You have a point... Well, alright. I'll start working on one.

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