Fic: Pivotal (1/1)

May 10, 2006 14:07

Title: Pivotal
Spoilers: Everything up to (but not including) "Euphoria."
Rating: Work safe, for the most part.
Word Count: 2,955
Summary: Five variations on the turning-point of the House/Cameron relationship. An emphasis on S2.
Notes: A very belated birthday fic for _vicodin...about a month and some change late. Thank you to enchanted_april for the beta job. And a ( Read more... )

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housecam May 10 2006, 22:30:23 UTC
Wow...very nice. Now if they would actually do this on the damn show I'd be in heaven.:)

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jovsg May 10 2006, 23:07:17 UTC
Absolutely brilliant. Loved it. Totally got what you did with it, too. The natural progression of what both characters have to go through before Scene V could ever really happen. From the hurt, bitterness, denial, acceptance, and finally the risk, the chance. Guh! It was so good! *claps*

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kj_draft May 10 2006, 23:31:45 UTC
Just what I needed today. So well-written. Loved the way each one built on the last, even if they weren't necessarily related. Thanks for sharing!!

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enchanted_april May 11 2006, 01:40:15 UTC
How can I not heap praise upon this wonderful piece written by my lovely beta and friend? I love every section of this, the progression is great and the use of language is close to lyrical in places. Their conversations are great, and I can se them happening, particularly the one in the cafeteria. Very strongly written.

*Happy Sigh* So glad that you've finshed and posted this. It was such a pleasure to read it all in one go from beginning to end. It really came together beautifully despite the frustration you expressed while writing it!

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teenwitch77 May 11 2006, 02:26:13 UTC
Brilliant. Loved every scenario, particularly the last one. This is definitely going into my memories.

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