Author: Bitterfig
Title: The Annunciation
Fandoms: Firefly/ Sandman Crossover
Pairing: River/Delirium
Summary: The crew of Serenity is surprised when they learn that River is expecting a child and even more surprised to find out how she got pregnant.
Beta Reader: Fedink
Word Count: 1323
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Implied sex and sexual
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now that I've finished reading it, all I can really say is... wow. I've been looking forward to seeing what comes of this prompt since I first saw it, and you most definitely did not disappoint. you've got the Serenity's crew down just about perfect, and River's dialogue is excellent - it's not as easy to write someone who's not right in the head as many people think, and you got her speech patterns down very well. I like Simon's reaction to the whole thing as well - this is something that's waaaaay out of his element, and it's very clear that he feels overwhelmed. I also really like how you worked Delirium into the Serenity 'verse; while the Endless really could show up anywhere, this works much better than simply having Delirium show up out of nowhere.
there are a few bits I'd pick, minor grammar errors and the like, but they didn't get in the way of me enjoying this story. excellent work. I have friends of both series that I'll be recommending this to.
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