Comments | yuna_lockhart: Final Fantasy VII; Avalanche; 024: Family

yuna_lockhart

Final Fantasy VII; Avalanche; 024: Family

Dec 18, 2007 00:41

Title: Scratch
Fandom: Final Fantasy VII
Characters: CloudxTifa
Prompt: 024: Family
Word Count: 782
Rating: PG
Summary: Her eyes are crying for a friendship she will never regain.
Author's Notes: Without spoiling the whole story, this is just a take on thefamily! angst I haven't really seen anywhere, possibly because nobody wants to ever say ' ( Read more... )

tifa, avalanche, ffvii, cloud, fanfic100, cloti

Comments 9

ravenclaw_devi December 18 2007, 13:05:01 UTC

I just want to hug them both, now.

yuna_lockhart December 19 2007, 06:56:08 UTC

Hehe :) Go ahead...they need it ♥

0iamthe_goddess December 18 2007, 15:26:21 UTC

aww! so sad. but really really good. this was really interesting. i like. i think you did a great job!

yuna_lockhart December 19 2007, 06:56:27 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

sakurabatou December 18 2007, 17:23:38 UTC

Ahhh. I almost cried. This was beautiful.

yuna_lockhart December 19 2007, 06:57:10 UTC

Oh wow...thank you so much, that really means a lot :)

(ps-I love your icon!)

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yuna_lockhart December 19 2007, 07:00:17 UTC

Oh, thank you so much for your kind words :) I agree, I do think there is a lot to be explored in Elmyra's presence in their lives...I hope to find more to read on this, as I know I could never quite do them justice...but I am happy to hear you think this works! ♥

colourfuless December 19 2007, 06:38:39 UTC

That was really, really lovely. I especially thought Cloud's reaction to Tifa's 'hypothetical' was really spot-on, but loved the way they still came together in the end. Wonderful :D.

yuna_lockhart December 19 2007, 07:01:37 UTC

Yay! It was really hard for me to find a way to express Cloud's reaction to that and have it actually come across without falling into the pit of over-explanation...I'm so happy you think it worked...thank you so very much! ♥